Bonds of Time - Comments

Comment swap told me to read this, and i highly enjoyed it. :) I really like your writing style, it kept me interested. I've never read a Sherlock Holmes story before and this one is unique. I'm glad I got given this one to read. Can’t wait to see what happens next.<3

i have never read a sherlock holmes story so i find this very intiresting. i think awesome how she went back it time. i wonder if she will ever get back to her time. i really like the way you have written this story :)

I love it, as I'm expected of your writing, and it's giving me lots and lots and lots of inspiration for the work I'm making for you! ;)

I just want to compliment you (again), I'm already addicted to this story, and you only wrote three/four chapters!

A short update: half of the artwork is done it should be done by tomorrow. :P

Would sendin Holmes not be a reward not a threat? Just saying.. Anyways, this is building up to some very interesting chapters ahead. I wonde what you have planned and how Holmes will conduct those test and so on. I also wonder just what Watson has to say to all of this. I liked what you said about the whole one way ticket time travel thing. It fits very well I think, but then again that was the plan. Never mind then. Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more.

Wow! that's all I have to say, this story great. I'm a huge fan of sherlock holmes, and read all of the orginal stories. So I was glad to see that you posses an excellent knowledge of the story, and were able to apply that to your peice. The concept is very original and I can't wait to read more. One thing I might mention is that you should probably check it more thoroughly for slight spelling/grammar mistakes, but other than that it is a good peice. Also, should you find the time, feel free to check out the first few chapters of my story called "The Beast: part 1." The story is a mystery/horror so I think you might like it, and your advice would be much appreciated :)

Definitely interesting. You have my Attention for this. I like the development in the story so far, the whole two chapters and I'm looking forward to seeing how your take on this time travel thing will go. Good chapter and I'm looking forward to even more 1 hopefully soon

Comment swap told me to read this, and i highly enjoyed it. :] I really like your writing style, it kept me interested. I'm not the biggest Sherlock Holmes fan, this story has some serious potential. Good job. <3

this, indefinitely, is a very unique story! but don't worry, I mean that in a good way! :-)
I've only ever heard of sherlock holmes, I never really watched. but this is seriously a great story. you have a good writing style, you know how to make things flow from paragraph-to-paragraph (which is a good quality to have!) and. you also have a good use of vocabulary, which is important.
I can't wait to read one, so: pretty please, update soon??
keep on writing, you have a talent!!! :-)
- olivia <3

Finally! This is wonderful. I'm subscribing. You write so well, with such advanced vocabulary and with such precision and an overall astounding way of crafting a story, I can't get enough of your work. Keep writing! :)

Very unique. I love Sherlock Holmes. Your vocabulary is out of this world. Theres not much to say considering theres only one chapter so far, but it's good already. I could visualize it easily which is a plus to a story. This will probably be very interesting. I can't wait to read more and find out what the plot is. Update soon! :)

Well that was definitely unique :) There's not very many people on Mibba, at least that I've seen, that write with a larger vocabulary like you do. But this seemed to start very quickly, where prologues tend to have more background to the story instead of clike a Chapter One sort of thing.

I recommended it, and I subscribed. The banner should be done next week i hope. ;)

Heyyy, I got this for a comment swapp and there's not much i can say about it as there is only one chapter;) but it's really good so farr;) and good description of the characters. It flows very well and is easy to read. Please update soooon!:) xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxo

This could be interesting. Can't really say much after one chapter. But it really does seem interesting. Subscribing! And hoping for more soon.