This Disease Infects Us All - Comments

Yeah, I really need to update this...

Interesting, but short.

Oh, I'm sorry! I was typing this from my book and so couldn't see what I wrote...I thought I'd checked it for mistakes, but obviously not! Thank you, and I'll correct it now :)

There are a few things I feel like I should point out. Instead of "definitely not my type," you wrote "defiantly not my type." And you wrote "Juliet's wast" instead of "waist." I like it though. Your characters are interesting and I can't wait to see how things go for them. Please, keep it up.