Stars and Stripes - Comments

so yeah urm, you finished the story ages ago but a comment on a older story is deserved. I'm speechless at your perfect writing and ending... wow!

I SAW IT COMING BUT I DIDN'T WANT IT TO HAPPEN AND I STARTED THIS AT 3AM WHICH I KNEW WAS A BAD PLAN AND NOW IT'S NEARLY SIX AND I JUST WANT TO READ THE SEQUEL BUT I'M SICK AND HAVE WORK TOMORRO-- TODAY AND EVERYTHING IS EXPLODING.

This was sort of wonderful and I shouldn't have just spent an hour and a half reading it, but i really enjoyed it!

MY GOD!! THAT ENDING WAS EPIC!! XD YOU SHOULD DO THE SEQUAL! GREAT JOB LOVE :) YOUR AN AWSOME WRITER :D

WHAT OMG NO WHAT

Since I had to deal with Niall, NIALL, crying you better make a sequel. (Please)

xx

sequel. niall made me cry. NIALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

SEQUEL, GURL, SEQUEL.
You made my cry... I had to explain most of my tears when I went to the kitchen that I had just yawned. >.> :)
But beautifully written, the whole shibang. <3

Sequel please!!!!!

Leave it up to harry to screw everything up. Anyway... Sequel! Sequel! Sequel!

Sequel!

I'd like a sequel with Harry getting one last chance (and I'd really like a happy ending as well :) )
This was really sad, I almost cried (and I never cry, so that's a big thing)

SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!
fucking harry styles...

I thought the ending was her ending up pregnant (her being sick). Sequel idea?

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Oh. My. Fucking. God. I LOVED the ending. I picked up that he cheated...but a sex tape?!?!? Genius!!! Ya know, life sucks sometimes. It was a realistic an plausible ending. Forget the rainbows and unicorns lovey dovey stuff. If you cheat, shit happens. I loved that not only him and Olivia broke up, but also the band. I mean...his actions affected everyone. Even the strongest of friendships can be ruined. So I liked that incorporation. Great twist. Basically I loved this story, if that wasn't already obvious. From the beginning I liked how Olivia didn't go all fangirl on him. It seems that far too many fanfics start that way. Then when he finally got her, he lost her because he asked for it. There was no disillusionment and blind faith into their relationship and that was an awesome foundation the build the story from.

A sequel would be cool, if you want. I would love to see how this plays out. But either way i am satisfied! Aaaag! I loved this so much it is a real problem:)

sequel! omfg write a sequel! don't leave me hanging!

OHMYGOD. I CAN'T BREATHE. That was so intense, why, why, why, why, why, HARRY YOU DIRTY BASTARD!
Come back, SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL.
I don't care if they get back together and you end it with a tragedy like this, I JUST NEED MORE.
Don't do this to me.

Welp, I hope the condom didn't break because I was officially mind fucked. Sweet, baby unicorns.