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  • lumosmancer

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    so yeah urm, you finished the story ages ago but a comment on a older story is deserved. I'm speechless at your perfect writing and ending... wow!
    December 16th, 2012 at 07:30pm
  • Caitosaur.

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    I SAW IT COMING BUT I DIDN'T WANT IT TO HAPPEN AND I STARTED THIS AT 3AM WHICH I KNEW WAS A BAD PLAN AND NOW IT'S NEARLY SIX AND I JUST WANT TO READ THE SEQUEL BUT I'M SICK AND HAVE WORK TOMORRO-- TODAY AND EVERYTHING IS EXPLODING.
    December 1st, 2012 at 02:46pm
  • purple_em

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    This was sort of wonderful and I shouldn't have just spent an hour and a half reading it, but i really enjoyed it!
    November 30th, 2012 at 02:43am
  • forever_serrato

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    MY GOD!! THAT ENDING WAS EPIC!! XD YOU SHOULD DO THE SEQUAL! GREAT JOB LOVE :) YOUR AN AWSOME WRITER :D
    November 27th, 2012 at 02:38am
  • maribaylock

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    WHAT OMG NO WHAT
    November 26th, 2012 at 04:35am
  • unbroken13

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    Since I had to deal with Niall, NIALL, crying you better make a sequel. (Please)

    xx
    November 26th, 2012 at 02:36am
  • rebelsandstunners

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    sequel. niall made me cry. NIALLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
    November 25th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • Red The Small

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    SEQUEL, GURL, SEQUEL.
    You made my cry... I had to explain most of my tears when I went to the kitchen that I had just yawned. >.> :)
    But beautifully written, the whole shibang. <3
    November 25th, 2012 at 07:20pm
  • marcellaandrade

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    Sequel please!!!!!
    November 25th, 2012 at 06:20pm
  • Carried.Away.

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    Leave it up to harry to screw everything up. Anyway... Sequel! Sequel! Sequel! Very Happy
    November 25th, 2012 at 02:23pm
  • weeezer100

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    Sequel!
    November 25th, 2012 at 01:04pm
  • mammu92

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    I'd like a sequel with Harry getting one last chance (and I'd really like a happy ending as well :) )
    This was really sad, I almost cried (and I never cry, so that's a big thing)
    November 25th, 2012 at 10:15am
  • fazedmemories

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    SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL!
    fucking harry styles...
    November 25th, 2012 at 09:06am
  • WordsWhisperedSlowly

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    I thought the ending was her ending up pregnant (her being sick). Sequel idea?
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:52am
  • WordsWhisperedSlowly

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    FSDV FAFYWET37 7E FHHDKN F GF WD H HU8Y WUH
    WHY??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:51am
  • WordsWhisperedSlowly

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    FSDV FAFYWET37 7E FHHDKN F GF WD H HU8Y WUH
    WHY??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:51am
  • WordsWhisperedSlowly

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    ASDAASDB HT4Y
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:50am
  • the_space_between

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    Oh. My. Fucking. God. I LOVED the ending. I picked up that he cheated...but a sex tape?!?!? Genius!!! Ya know, life sucks sometimes. It was a realistic an plausible ending. Forget the rainbows and unicorns lovey dovey stuff. If you cheat, shit happens. I loved that not only him and Olivia broke up, but also the band. I mean...his actions affected everyone. Even the strongest of friendships can be ruined. So I liked that incorporation. Great twist. Basically I loved this story, if that wasn't already obvious. From the beginning I liked how Olivia didn't go all fangirl on him. It seems that far too many fanfics start that way. Then when he finally got her, he lost her because he asked for it. There was no disillusionment and blind faith into their relationship and that was an awesome foundation the build the story from.

    A sequel would be cool, if you want. I would love to see how this plays out. But either way i am satisfied! Aaaag! I loved this so much it is a real problem:)
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:48am
  • sandrashameless

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    sequel! omfg write a sequel! don't leave me hanging!
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:31am
  • confidentcoward

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    OHMYGOD. I CAN'T BREATHE. That was so intense, why, why, why, why, why, HARRY YOU DIRTY BASTARD!
    Come back, SEQUEL SEQUEL SEQUEL.
    I don't care if they get back together and you end it with a tragedy like this, I JUST NEED MORE.
    Don't do this to me.

    Welp, I hope the condom didn't break because I was officially mind fucked. Sweet, baby unicorns.
    November 25th, 2012 at 08:28am
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