Not All Monsters Get Along - Comments

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wow, the title itself really got me hooked and i was just shaking in anticipation as i was waiting for this to load. the banner pictures are really...wow, they're really creepy and i just stared at them, sort of shaking in anticipation.

this is really a work of art. the title of each chapter sets up the reader for something more. though it could use a bit more description and detail, this is a master piece.

Hi! I was lead here through that nifty comment swap feature. I've only read the first couple chapters, but I'm really liking this so far. :D I'll definitely be following it and checking out your other works. I think your writing style is just my flavor. I can't wait to see where everything is going. I'm glad you have each chapter labeled, so I remember that it's a different character each time I start a new one. Should be a fun read!

Keep writing~ :3

Comment Swap bought me to your story. It was alright and I wasn't too into it. I guess its because its not my type of story. You could use more details in your story to make it more interesting. I was confused by the many characters also. Other than that, good luck with the story.

Poor Gordon. I like the new way you're doing these chapters! It's easier to follow along now. (:

I'm loving this. It was hard for me to keep up with all of the characters at first, but I'm getting the hang of it.

This is really interesting and original, even for things outside of Mibba. I've gotta say, your layout (or really, the pictures at the top) drew me into the story the best. I like how you have all these different races, and a little saying for each one.

Your style seems to fit this kind of genre perfectly. It comes across as sophisticated, withdrawn, and eerie, albeit a little strange at times. The only thing I think I'll have a problem with is remember who is who - you've introduced so many POVs so quickly.

I'm subscribing, and I hope to read more soon! I can't wait to see where this goes.

I wasn't sure what to expect when i got this story from the comment swap, but i went in with an open-mind. I really hope i don't offend you, this just simply wasn't the kind of story i enjoy reading. I also stopped in a few places thinking "okay, and...?" . I think you have a very developed idea of this story and what you want it to be. You left me interested about whats going to happen in the future of this story, but not enough for me to continue reading.

I'm really glad I got this story in the comment swap. There wasn't a lot about this story that I disliked. Your dialogue is somewhat riveting and suspenseful. Your vocabulary is exceptional. The only thing I didn't like was the lack of detail. There were tiny moments where your details were amazingly descriptive, but there were times where I was just thinking, "Okay, and...?". It's just my opinion. I do like this story. -A

i really like it c: it's very interesting

I love it:3