Skylines - Comments

@ Snow.White.Queen.

Thank you so much! Wow, that's an incredible compliment, you just absolutely made my day. Thank you!

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I've never actually listened to the band before, but I'm kind of thinking about doing so after reading this.
I like the layout, it's pretty and it's easy to read. The plot is good. It's strong, and I haven't seen anything written like this before. Your characters are all likeable and relatable. I think this could also be read as an original fiction. :) I like your writing style, it's straight to the point but still offers detail when necessary. All in all, good job.

Omg this was fuckin
awesome

@ Rain_2010
Wow, that comment means a lot. <3 Thank you so much!

First I got to say I love the layout, just saying cause it looks very nice.

Now with your story, I got to say this was a very interesting story.
I never knew there was a band named: Hollywood Undead, and after reading this makes me curious to listen to their music for some reason. Your story seems pretty original for a fanfiction, it was hard to tell the difference. When I got to the ending I was like "Whoa" so that right there is a great job. I don't know what else to say, I couldn't see many grammar or spelling issues so that is a plus.

Well it seems like now I got to read the sequel
Great Job.

Love the ending, I think thts the best decision tht she made so I'm Team Ashlee :)

Ugh, I love this story so much.
I'm so team Dylan right now, but I mean, Jordon may change, who knows...
Can't wait for the next update! :D

*dies* tht picture was amazing, I'm like wiggling my toes of joy right now keep up with those pictures cuz it just made my day oh god tht man is fine, love the story, but tht picture was good it's gettin hot I think I'm catching a fever *fans myself* can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Team Dylan <3

Love it, poor Ash goin to watch a scary movie as a date with Dylan, and he knows how she is with scary movies soo y would he chose tht movie in the first place, question do u have by any chance pictures of mr. Sexy Ragan in ur collection for ur lovely readers who love George becuz tht would be great I'm all the guys have their own bite of sexiness in their own way but I love George the most can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

I reread the chapters again and I would have to say tht I don't kno whose team I am on becuz Dylan treats her right but so does Jordon even tho he is in a rough patch right now but I think he deserves a second chance I mean Dylan got one soo y can't Jordon u kno soo as of now I'm team Switzerland, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Awe, I loved the update. Finally! I can't wait for more.

This is such a great story, i cant wait for more updates.
But I am still team Jordon, i think he deserves another chance.

well damn it seems like Dylan has got the girl again after a lot of redemption, told tht barbie doll off and is now a happy man, Jordon not so much soo team Dylan, cant wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Aweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee lovers it

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Dylan, Def Dylan :) Team Alvarez!!!!!

Love this story it seems tht Dylan is redeeming himself right now which is good I mean I support team Dylan right now becuz he is being a great guy towards Ashlee, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

Oh. I so love this story!!!!!!

this was good. ((: