Binding Me - Comments

Girl you should really look into publishing some of your stories they're so awesome, you should really update!

I LOVE this so far! It's so addicting and so unlike most of the other stories on mibba. Adrian is to die for, and I can't wait to read more.

I think that you have a great style of writing and you also have a great imagination. I thought that the amount of detail you put into this was fab. The characters were very believable. There were also little to no spelling errors so great with that. Your use of imagery is fab. Keep up the great work.

This is lovely, my dear. I do quite enjoy the characters so far. The words you use to describe the imagery is fantastic; flawless, even. I really like this so far. I can't wait to read more. (:

comment swap brought me here, and i really like it! my only problem is the summary is really long, and it should have been a prolouge. other than that i love your writing style, and the character evan seems like a huge dick. haha

I think in the second sentence you could have done without "attached to trees". You used treeline in the previous sentence, so in my mind, it's kind of repetitive.
I really like your story so far!
I especially liked the imagery of the wired door making a patterned tattoo.

I think in the second sentence you could have done without "attached to trees". You used treeline in the previous sentence, so in my mind, it's kind of repetitive.

I really like your story so far!
I especially liked the imagery of the wired door making a patterned tattoo.

This is really good, very interesting, well written, I like the characters and storyline and you have me intrigued! Excited to see where this will go! (: I love the dark brooding atmosphere and the slow build up of tension
Btw I'm so subscribed

Nope not really i think we could do without an evan :P

I like what you've cooked up here. update soon

So i like the idea, the ages of your characters don't really seem realistic though but i like their pictures :) i don't like evan :P i want her to actually meet mysterious neighbor person *subscribes*
can't wait for more! :)