Aw, oh my goodness. It was very cute when Frank realized he was genuinely smiling and laughing for the first time. There are a few grammatical errors -- but no big deal. Just the first letter in dialogue should be capitalized. "Like this." But this is a very sweet story, I am excited to see where it goes. c:
Aw, oh my goodness. It was very cute when Frank realized he was genuinely smiling and laughing for the first time. There are a few grammatical errors -- but no big deal. Just the first letter in dialogue should be capitalized. "Like this." But this is a very sweet story, I am excited to see where it goes. c:
Really Frankie? It took that long for the lightbulb in your head to shine? Silly boy. =] Spread Eagle! Haha! Oh gosh, the first thing that I thought of was Chicago, their song Jailhouse Anthem (I think that's what it was). I love Gerard, Mikey and Frank's personalities! They're so adorable! I love all the endearments that Gerard uses for Frankie and how he acts in general. He has this mysterious, dark air about him. I suspect that Mikey and Gerard can communicate telepathically. *nods* I swear, they have a mysterious air about them, which is good. Is it wrong that I was laughing my ass off when I read Frank's mental dialogue in response to the nun? XD Your story is absolutely amazing hun, please, for the love of Frerard, update soon!
*Hello, Comment Swap sent me here * I'm not a huge Chem fan, and I'm not to in to slash either. So I personally, didn't really enjoy reading this. But it was still good.
There were some grammar and spelling errors, but it was still easy to fallow. You had great discription. But even though I am not a huge fan of My Chem Romance, or a fan of slash, hopefully the fans who are will enjoy this! Good luck!
Comment Swap sent me back, sorry. xD. Comment Swap has some glitches that drive me crazzzyyy! Soo, once again, good luck! And I hope you keep writing!
*Hello, Comment Swap sent me here * I'm not a huge Chem fan, and I'm not to in to slash either. So I personally, didn't really enjoy reading this. But it was still good.
There were some grammar and spelling errors, but it was still easy to fallow. You had great discription. But even though I am not a huge fan of My Chem Romance, or a fan of slash, hopefully the fans who are will enjoy this! Good luck!
I'm from comment swap, and even though I'm a huge My chemical romance fan, for some reason i can't get into gerard + frank, known as Frerard.
I did read the chapter, and found it quite nice. few errors, good description though. This should really turn out nicely and hopefully fans of frerard will see that.
(Comment swap!) First of all, I'm not a fan of My Chemical Romance but that doesn't really matter. I really relate to Frank because I have purple hair but I'm also a straight-A student. People judge too much. Relating to characters is important so nice job. Also, I really get the feel that you had a lot of fun writing this so therefore I had fun reading it. That's also important. This was great!