Two Vibrant Hearts Could Change - Comments

this is one of the most amazing stories iv ever read. i was up till nearly 5am because i couldnt tear myself away from it. i love it! please write more sooon.
xoxoxoxox

Love the story...don't know why I haven't reviewed before?

I thought I had...anyways...I totally dig the plot...I'm a sucker for love triangles, yes!

And I love the way you write and how the story goes...it's not so obvious...leave Zacky, be with Matt...it's not like that...

I cannot believe you put them into a car crash...and I really hope everyone turns out right...and Zacky, you bastard...not even a word to your girlfriend? That's not nice...and don't tell me he has a concussion and lost his memory...that would really suck!

Anyway, I hope everything turns out right...and I really love all the twists and turns you put into the story...

More soon?

shit fuck! more soon!

fuck, i hope everyone's ok.
i really don't want any of them to die.
i'm curious of matt's reaction towards Zacky though.
update as soon as you can!
x

As long as Zacky's alright nothing else matters. (Even though he was being a prick)

Poor poor Syn. =[ He can't die! I'll give him mouth-to-mouth any day. =']

aaahhh mooooorreeee!! i want mooore!!!:( great chapter btw:P

what?! noooo!!! don't leave us hanging here!
gahhhh i love the update so much i just NEED moreeee ><

LOL at Alex.
Ever the over-dramatic one.
Shagging at the wheel indeed =']
The newly popular driving offence.
I love it =']

Anyway, I do apologise it's taken me so long to comment.
But I'm commenting now, so it's all good in the pud :mrgreen:

Poncy Essay Title

Whoever’s idea it was to play music with the loudest bass in the world at God knows what time in the morning is soon to be dead.

:lmfao
Charming.
Just charming.
Aren't I the friendliest, most elequent person in the world?
Honestly =']

I’m just a guest on this bus and I seem to be creating more problems than anyone else – well, that’s how it looks to me.

That's the exact same thing I told you!
Thief! *shakes fist*
Nah I'm kidding - everyone else is thinking it =']

Maybe it’d just be better if I left…

:cheese: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!
THEN I'LL BE STUCK WORKING WITH ALEX AGAIN!
*falls over*
That's just not good O_O

...

Haha, I'm kidding, Alex.
Hurt your German feelings (;

I can’t resist my lips a small smile despite my previous mood as the calming chords of Warmness on the Soul float up the stairs, muffled by the lounge door and ceiling.

It's our song!

Frowning, I reach for my cell phone and discover that it’s 4.30pm – way past God-knows-what-time-in-the-morning. I sure can sleep these days…

That's just a normal day for me :file:

The bus is still and it sounds like there is nobody downstairs – we’re probably at another truck stop or have stopped at a diner for lunch. Nice of them to wake me up…

Yeah, fuckin' dick'eads

“It’s all of my business if it’s turning you into a cocky shit and affecting the band!” grumbles the second voice, which I immediately identify as Matt’s – and from the words he’s speaking, I can gather that he’s arguing with Zacky.

:lmfao Yeah, go Matt!
Hit him! Kick him! ...preferably in his crotch for being a twat :con:
Haha, hurt his chubby feelings.

“And what do you mean, anyway?”Zacky continues frenziedly. “Of course I can’t tell her that, are you crazy?”

Tell me what?! :cheese:
TELL ME WHAT?!?
Oh God.
He's pregnant isn't he.
Well - can't say I'm that surprised.

“Between staying and leaving, dipshit,” he answers bluntly.

:lmfao
Go Matt!
King of crap comebacks *applauds*

“Whose side are you on?”

“At the moment, hers,” Matt hisses, shocking Zacky into silence and drawing a small gasp from my own lips.

WAHEY!
Fuck you, you twat!
Omg that proper made me smile!
*Chandler style victory dance*
You suck, Zacky.
You suck big hairy builder's cock :con:

“Just – just don’t tell her, Matt.” He finally answers, shaking his head.

:cheese: NO!
DO tell me, Matt!
You better fucking tell me! *grabs top of shirt in threatening fashion*

“I think you should talk to Zack, y’know,” he says gently, peering at me thoughtfully.

*shakes head*
NO!
YOU TELL ME *bares teeth*

“Well, why can’t you just wait it out?” He asks, and to my simultaneous joy and despair, I detect a pleading tone in his voice.

Awwww
Pleading?
For me?
To stay??
Surely he'd be begging me to fucking leave XD
I would be if I had to live with such a drama queen for a month :tehe:

Instantly I melt into him as his body crashes against mine with the motion of the vehicle, but as soon as I’m re-acquainted with his silken lips and the warmth of his firm torso, footsteps clatter up the stairs and he pulls away.

D= RUDE.
I was in the middle of something VERY nice then.
*folds arms*

I’m scared for my life as I wonder what the hell is happening, belongings and curtains flying everywhere as another resounding squeal of the brakes meets my ears and I’m thrown back into Matt’s bunk, before my head meets something solid and my eyes see nothing more.

:cheese: OMG
You killed me off, Sam!
You killed me off in this story!
That's just mean
Me and Matt haven't even had a chance to go out properly!

:hand

Well, I'm off now (:
Took me long enough, and this comment sucks but HEY.
What can you do? *sticks tongue out*

I love youuuuuuu :con:

...

And remember;

BOUNCE LIKE YO' ASS HAS THE HICCUPS.

:con:

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:cheese:

Mega cheese moment!! What happened?!?! You need to tell me!!
Was the bus driver drunk? Did he run into an old lady?? Was he shagging someone while driving???

:cheese:

Please please please update before you go! I will if you do :-}
Pwomise :)

This is such a great fucking story, i love it :D
LY XXXXXXXX

this story is effin sick and i luv it

what happened to them and amazing btw!

nooooooooooooooo!!!!!

Cliffhangersss

GRRRRRRR

This story is god in the form of words. ^^
update soon!
:cute:

:O Oh no!!!
Amazing update more sooon? :)

That was an amazing update!!!
PLEASE update again soon!

*jaw drops* holy crap!!! PLEASE update soon! damn that was freaking good!

Ohhhh I hope the bus doesn't tip over!!
Matt and Pippa sooooo want each other hehehe.
Loved the update!!

Ahhhh...Update update update!!eeeep

Oh wow, so much drama with the couples!!!
Amazing!!