Two Vibrant Hearts Could Change - Comments

Phew, thought it wasn't gonna let me comment.
That would be bad.
Mibba would not be around for much longer... -glares at computer screen-

Okay, so...
Val is here.
Ummm, when did she start screwing Matt again?
Because I think I totally missed that one.
Chea, much as I love Val, it's obvious that she's second best to Pippa.
'Cause Pippa is the sex... to Matt anyways.
HAH.
And Sam, by the looks of things.

ANYHOW!
I'm intrigued now...
What will happen in the next update?
Well, there's only one way... well two if you're me.
I could pester her 'til she tells me... or she could update again.

Sam should update.
It's less bother and requires less effort from Hannah.

Anyone else love writing in the third person?
xD

“Actually I was just about to –”

“Yoink!” Matt darts into the washroom, cutting off Syn’s words and locking the door.

“Ah, fuck you, man!” Syn growls as he wearily gets up and walks past he door, banging on it.

“You snooze you lose, Haner!” I hear Matt yell back

I know that was while back, but, I just re-read this story.
I kind of do that too, and Brian and Jake (Not Brian Haner, my cousins, sadly)
Get effin pissed at me
lmao
Awesome update!
And
It's noon, and I had sugar...
*twitches*

Right,
Well, just to let you know - this comment probably won't be as long as usual
Seeing as this update was sad and intense and heart-throbbing and an emotional rollercoaster and yeah.
I dunno if i'll be able to make it as funny as usual x]

*Ann Robinson stylee* Now, let's play...The Weakest Link.
*dun, dun, dun-dun*

I hear Matt cackle victoriously and Johnny mumbles something snidely, making Zacky laugh too.

Something along the lines of;
"Stupid skin'ead. Go take a shower, ya' over-sized freak, 'cause you suck major hairy cock."
??
I can totally imagine that and all =']

I’m aware that it’s Zacky’s hands that are holding me, but one half of me wishes they were Matt’s.

Who're you kidding?
Both halves want them to be Matt's.
:roll: Pippa is soooo in denial.

“No, I didn’t mean it like that. It… feels like it’s been ages…” he pouts into my neck.

“I’d say six days,” I giggle.

“Exactly…”

haha, JOG ON.
Think how poor Matt feels.
I just went and disowned him for Zacky and all his sexual innuendo.
I mean, I love Zacky - but he's a dickhead in this.

“Hello?” I yawn into my cell.

“I wish you would check your emails more often, Pippa,” Alex sighs down the phone. I grin.

Rude, much?
I have a life you know, Alex.
:roll: Lol, hurt his meanie feelings.

“It’s about your article," he continues. "It was great, really long and stuff… but you know you just can’t talk about one member of the band,”

“What do you mean?”

“You’ve never done this before really, but the whole article was about M Shadows,” Alex replies, and I freeze.

HAHA.
Got caught there, I did.
He knows i want to Matt's arse, he does.
Gettin' jealous, he is.
He wants Matt's arse too, he does.
I gotta stop talking like this, I do.

“I dunno… they were really on fire that night, and he is the front man and everything,” I explain, standing up and making for the door as everyone looks at me.

Lol, that's not gunna look obvious at all to the others.
Imagine poor Matt though, just hearing that tiny bit
I miss the sexy beast ='[


“Pippa’s told me all about you, you know. Well, not really, just the physical details… and I’m interested in meeting you,” Jimmy says in a seductive voice, and Matt rolls his eyes. “You should fly out to visit Pippa, I’m sure we can arrange to stop at a hotel that night and pawn Leana off with Pippa and Sam–”

“Jimmy, stop being an ass,” I laugh. “He’ll actually fly out if you tell him that, you know,”

I bet he booked the flight right there and then.

My feet just manage to graze the dusty ground and the cold metal chain beneath my palms has left pink imprints in my skin.

Lol, only just.
Cos my short-arse legs can't reach, blates.
I do actually have really short legs.
I just happen to have a really long torso x]
So I look tall, when in actual fact - I should be really ickle ;)
Just a bit of pointless info for you

but of course, Matthew Sanders doesn’t let anyone see him cry.

Apart from me, of course.
He cried a day and a half earlier when I - I - ended it *sobs hysterically*

“That old chestnut,” Zacky spits. “Maybe I’d be better off with Amy – at least she doesn’t sleep with people’s friends behind their backs…”

No, but it's alright if she tries to get off with you right infront of your girlfriend is it?!
My god, Zacky, don't be such a fucking hypocrite ¬_¬
I bet you slept with her the night I came in at four in the morning anyway.
*scowls*

“Mm, yeah, I’m awake,” I yawn, turning over to face him. He grins back as he takes off his shoes and belt, and I watch him intently, finding it sort of strange to see him smiling when the dream I had involved him yelling at me and calling me a skank.

But I'm not a skank!
I'm a nice person - I think.
Why am I a skank? *sobs*
Matt wouldn't call me a Skank ='[

“well, apart from Matt. I think something’s bugging him, he wasn’t all that energetic tonight and hardly stirred the crowd at all. He’s pretty drunk off beer he had during the show – I think Brian’s sorting him out downstairs,”

“Really?” I ask, my palms feeling clammy already. “Did you ask him about it?”

Drop another bombshell on me why don't you!
*heart rips in half*

“Shit, stop it,” he moans incoherently after a minute or two of my teasing, sighing and biting the duvet cover. I take my mouth away completely and he looks down at me, cocking his eyebrow. I laugh and stick my tongue out, before running the very tip over his head. He groans loudly and flops back down into the pillow, releasing his hand from my shoulder. I lick lightly from tip to base and back up on the underside, pausing once to bite playfully at a protruding vein. He hisses and groans as I hear mumbling downstairs become louder, and try to ignore it.

Lol, in the middle of an emotional moment - That was so hot!
How can you say you don't write hot stuff?!
That's an orgasm in a jar right there!

"Guys?" Syn asks, staring at Matt now.

"What?" Matt shrugs, moving his gaze from me.

Syn pauses before shaking his head, dismissing his comment.

Shit! He knows! *dramatically faints*

I look back to see Matt staring at us once again, and in a sudden contrast of emotion he smiles tentatively at me. I almost smile back, but before my jaw summons up the courage, he stumbles to his bunk and falls through the curtain.

Matt hates me.
*dies*
That's like my worst nightmare.
Both to be in that situation and to have Matt hate me.

He fucking hates meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee, la la la la.
I tried to hard, and he tore mah feelin's like 'ah had none.
AND RIPPED 'EM AWAY.

ily :con:
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I just stumled over this but took time to read the entire thing and it is fucking amazing. Keep it up!

I love it all so much, yes i do!!

awwwww I feel sorry for matt :cry:
but at the same time I want her to be with Zacky.
I hope they work things out.

I need more updatessss!!!

NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you HAVE TO UPDATE NOW!!!!!!!!!!
DOES PIPPA GO AFTER MATT?!?!?!?!

Great update.

OHHHH i loveed the update!
I feel sorry for her though

wowies
loved it
i still think amy needs to drop dead!

Loveee it!!! soo sooo sooo Much!!!!

Great update.

eeeeeeeeeeee love this story sooooo much!!! cant wait for another 1! xD gooo luck in your exams! i no how stressful they can be lol xox

great story!! just found it today!! totally addicted... matt and pippa forever!!!!more soon???

that was wonderful, maffew sandahz. I <3 your writing!

Amazing as always!!!

Dayum that chapter was.... it was intense, dude. ^^
Bravo to your writing skills. : )

Oh my actual God!
I swear, I had a little tear in my eye towards the end of that.
Utterly amazing, dear girl.

I'm soooooooooooooorry for rushing you!
I didn't mean to!
I was just desperate for an update, okay?!?
*hyperventilates*
I'll be sure never to ask again.

“No, I’ll be fine… honestly,”

“Are you sure?”

“Yeah, just – just give me a minute…”

:lmfao
When I first read over that, I for some reason thought of Get It Up.
"Just give it a minute, give it a minute..."
Best times ever =']

Matt is the last to file out and pauses next to me as the opening organ of Critical Acclaim rings out and shakes the foundations of the arena. He whips his head round to check that no-one is in eyeshot in the small nick next to the stage, and to my total surprise, leans in close and plants a short kiss on my lips.

See?!?
Fucking gagging for a little bit of action.
*sings Fuck Her Gently*
How ironic ;)
"THATS FUCKING TEAMWO-O-ORK.

...

To be kind, I'll post this comment now to (Hopefully) cheer you up and then continue to write it tomorrow.
Seeing as it's not going to get done tonight and I'm tired, so I'll use my morning humour.

"IT'S ALL ABOUT YOU, EBAAAAAAAAAAAAAY."

ily xxxxxxxxxx

EDIT::

This is the other half of mah comment for you ;)
I know it's a little late seeing as the next chapter is up, but better late than never right?

*rubs hands together*

Matt gets to the trademark point where he doesn’t bother with a shirt at all and plays the last three songs half naked

That's not just a trademark onstage, believe me.

I frown. I can just make out Jimmy standing up behind his drum kit, also half-naked due to heat,

lol, I betAlex Gayboy cheered up when he read that ;)
Srsly, he's desperate for some Jimmy action.
I think it's about the only thing that'll get his hand out of those pants.

“Eugh, Pippa, I really don’t feel good,” Zacky moans as I steer him down the hallway.

“Are you gonna puke?” I inquire quickly.

“Probably… my stomach feels like it’s eating itself,” he stutters

Real elequant, Zack.
Any normal person would say, "Yeah."
But you had to say that.
Now I feel sick.

“Come on, baby, let’s just get to the bus and then I’ll grab you some water and you can lie down, yeah?” I coax, stroking his face and pushing the hair back off his forehead. “Jesus, you’re boiling,”

“No, I’m fucking freezing,” he tells me, and I pull him away from the wall.

NO.
You're fucking boiling.
Get it right, jackass.
='] Sorry, couldn't resist.

You can I'd be good in times of need.

“Do you need anything? Any help?” she asks with a compassionate simper, resting her hand on Zacky’s shoulder.

“Fuck off,” I snarl so only she and Zacky can hear, and for once, he doesn’t acknowledge my insult.

LOL.
Go Pippa ='] *cheers*
That bitch had it coming, tbf.

“Yeah, the leftover one from a few nights ago,” I reply in disgust. “Oh my actual God, how he could eat something so gross I’ll never know…”

:lmfao:
A) LOL at him eating curry leftovers from a few nights before.
B) LOL at my phrase "Oh my actual God!"

='] I love you, Sam.

My eyes flicker over the figure but a foot from me, entranced, and he raises an eyebrow. I turn my head away and curse myself, making him chuckle and cock his head.

Why does everyone find my sexual frustration funny?!
Only Alex should be laughed at in these situations ¬_¬
He's the sex-pig, not me *hmph*

The smile and dimples on his face give me a sudden urge to pounce on him and press myself to his gorgeous chest again – but I don’t.

:cheese: WHY THE HELL NOT?!
Oh wait, Zacky's in the bathroom *duh*
Shame, never done it in the kitchen of a tourbus.

He heaves a heavy sigh and his lips part to form words… but none come.

WHAT IS WITH THESE PEOPLE AND NOT FINISHING SENTANCES?!
Fuckin' yanks ¬_¬

“C’mon, darlin’,” Matt whispers, enticing me out of Zacky’s bed.

"Darlin'"
That's odd - he's never lead me away from a bed before :hm

I become very aware of the fact that I’m only in a thin, relatively short nightdress and sit down on the edge of the mattress, before shuffling back so I’m leaning against the wall, near the small window.

See, I'm not a cheap whore.
I have some class.
Sleeping around with different members of A7X - but at least I didn't flash when I sat on the bed ;)

“But when I’m here, we can never have anything like what you’re telling me I need,” I state. “If I’m unhappy with Zacky we can never have more than what is considered a sordid little affair, that will eventually root out and tear relationships apart. And if I work things out with him…”

“Then I can’t have you full stop,” he finishes in an undertone, the words breaking from his lips like something he’s known all along.

:cheese: SAM, HOW HAVE YOU THOUGHT OF THIS STORY-LINE?!
Like I said before, I've thought about it over and over again and I just don't see how it'd work!
I think you're an absolute genius, I really do

His mouth twists into an uncomfortable grimace, his entire face radiates sadness and the vulnerability that he’s not used to showing. I shakily prise my hands away from his and place one on his warm neck, leaning in and kissing him softly. I feel a tear run from his face to mine and slowly pull back, before breathing in his intoxicating, warm scent once more. I compose myself and look away from his eyes, before leaving the bed and walking back to Zacky’s bunk.

^ That is talent.
*goosebumps*
I actually did have a tear when I read that chapter.
I dunno how you do it, darlin'.
You make it all so personal like it could be anyone in that position.
It's a really addictive story and it's suprising you've got so few pages of comments x]
Not for long though, seeing as each one of mine takes up about a page each =']

Anyway - as per usual.
I love you beyond belief ;)
So...Tuesday...
My place or yours?
*squeezes bewbs together*

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loved it!
:D

IF PIPPA DOESN'T WANT ONE OF THEM, I'LL COMFORT THEM.
:lmfao

Comforting...
Rawr.

BAD ZACKY.
-pokes in eye-
BAD BAD BAD.
How dare you fancy Amy!
How dare she flirt with you!
HOW DARE I NOT BE INVOLVED!

I feel jealous.
WELLLL, there's always Jimmy.
We'll be great together.
You'd have none stop rhyming, because I love to rap/rhyme.
Jimmy's better at it though.
WE COULD HAVE INTERNAL ORGAN FAILURE TOGETHER.
Because I like, always eat too much then think my stomach is, and I quote Zacky in that chapter, 'eating itself'.

:)
The offer for comforting extends to Jimmy too.
All this drama that he's not involved in.
He'll be distraught.

DRAMA DRAMA DRAMA :file:
It's like freaking Hollyoaks.
Only, less crappy accents [no offence to people with those accents] and more hotness. OH YEASH, less gayness too.
Kieron and JP are like, pwoar though. xD
Yes yes, He's a priest, I KNOW!

Wow, I seem to have gone off topic.
That rarely happens.
...
Yeaaah, that was sarcasm.

-wanders off talking about chest hair-