Okay so I'm going to type as i read because the summary had me totally intrigued and I have the feeling I'm going to be having a LOT of thoughts, the first one being ASDGHDFJSK THE PICTURE IS FREAKING ME OUT. Okay, let's do this.
-FREUGER LIKE FREDDY IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE IRONIC?! -I'm already loving the detail up in this. -Okay okay okay I can already tell that I'm going to end up mildly grossed out by this but the writing makes it worth it. BLACK SLUDGE. o.o; -Can I just say that I'm already planning this out as a movie in my head? -IS SOMETHING GONNA HAPPEN TO KREUGER HE GOT BIT BY A RAT THAT WAS INJECTED WITH WEIRD STUFF. -Is he gonna get super powers? -I KNEW IT. WEIRD CHIZZ IS GOING DOWN. -How come everyone dies it's someone who has a wife and a newborn? ALMOST ALWAYS. Not that this is a problem; I'm just curious. -Where the body WAS? OH SNAP.
IT'S OFFICIAL THIS IS PERFECT I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE. Subscribing. Update SOON!
Wow! I was very impressed! Great story so far subscribed already and absolutely loved it. You seemed very credible in your writing, and my only suggestion is a pet peeve I have: gonna is text language, not literary language. I annoy myself with that really and can't wait for the next installment! More soon please!
-FREUGER LIKE FREDDY IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE IRONIC?!
-I'm already loving the detail up in this.
-Okay okay okay I can already tell that I'm going to end up mildly grossed out by this but the writing makes it worth it. BLACK SLUDGE. o.o;
-Can I just say that I'm already planning this out as a movie in my head?
-IS SOMETHING GONNA HAPPEN TO KREUGER HE GOT BIT BY A RAT THAT WAS INJECTED WITH WEIRD STUFF.
-Is he gonna get super powers?
-I KNEW IT. WEIRD CHIZZ IS GOING DOWN.
-How come everyone dies it's someone who has a wife and a newborn? ALMOST ALWAYS. Not that this is a problem; I'm just curious.
-Where the body WAS? OH SNAP.
IT'S OFFICIAL THIS IS PERFECT I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE. Subscribing. Update SOON!