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  • Okay so I'm going to type as i read because the summary had me totally intrigued and I have the feeling I'm going to be having a LOT of thoughts, the first one being ASDGHDFJSK THE PICTURE IS FREAKING ME OUT. Okay, let's do this.

    -FREUGER LIKE FREDDY IS THAT SUPPOSED TO BE IRONIC?!
    -I'm already loving the detail up in this.
    -Okay okay okay I can already tell that I'm going to end up mildly grossed out by this but the writing makes it worth it. BLACK SLUDGE. o.o;
    -Can I just say that I'm already planning this out as a movie in my head?
    -IS SOMETHING GONNA HAPPEN TO KREUGER HE GOT BIT BY A RAT THAT WAS INJECTED WITH WEIRD STUFF.
    -Is he gonna get super powers?
    -I KNEW IT. WEIRD CHIZZ IS GOING DOWN.
    -How come everyone dies it's someone who has a wife and a newborn? ALMOST ALWAYS. Not that this is a problem; I'm just curious.
    -Where the body WAS? OH SNAP.

    IT'S OFFICIAL THIS IS PERFECT I'M SO EXCITED TO READ MORE. Subscribing. Update SOON!
    August 6th, 2012 at 08:48am
  • Wow! I was very impressed! Great story so far subscribed already and absolutely loved it. You seemed very credible in your writing, and my only suggestion is a pet peeve I have: gonna is text language, not literary language. Very Happy I annoy myself with that really and can't wait for the next installment! More soon please!
    July 23rd, 2012 at 09:29am