Mess You Made - Comments

So good already. I'm excited!

So excited for this. Keep it up !!

Oh....and I'm still Team Jack.

I'll admit it, I cried, okay? Ugh. See what your writing does to me?
Ahhhhh I seriously think you should abandon all your other stories and just update this one. I didn't think I could love a story more than I loved Melody Maker, but then these came along and just asdfjkla;lajdkshal;skkahl
Okay, so abandoning them would not be the best idea. But still.
More soon pleeeeeaseeeeeee!!!!!

Yay for sequels :)

I think I might have actually teared up reading that last half.
It killed me to see the pain Jack was in... to only see it get worse when she explained what had happened. D:

I'm already hooked, so excited for this story I've been waiting for ages! Update soon, your an amazing writer :)x

Love this :)

holy shit!! poor jack :'( that letter is really sad
loved it <3 update soon <3

This prologue broke my heart, really badly.
Amazing.

My thoughts? I AM SO FREAKING EXCITED I CANT EVEN. I TOTALLY FANGIRLED WHEN I SAW THIS UPDATE BECAUSE I LOVED SMILING IN EVERYTHING AND NOW THE BEGINNING OF THIS ONE IS JUST ASALJDFALSFMAHL

update soon :)

damn....

I love itttt! Update soon please! <3

I'm so excited for this >.< Aw the letter </3

Gah, I'm so excited for the story omg, I nearly like, cried reading this, beautifully written :)

;-; i'm glad you updated but now i just kind of want to curl in a ball cry ;-;

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE start the sequel i really want to start reading it i really do

wow i read the sequel and it was amazing and know whats funny? you have at least 11 comments and you haven't even started the story :)

I'm too excited, the last one left me hanging and now I really want to know what's going to happen in this one. Where does Tom come into it! Oooohhhh