Loose Lips - Comments

Loved it! <3

You guys should definitely keep writing together. This was great! One of the best stories I've read lately. Great work.

Bummed it's over! Loved it!

Its over? well it was awesome!!!! Great last update:) Im glad it all worked out! cant wait for more from you two:D

NOOOO!! I don't want it to be over, I loved this so much! I'm so glad that Brian and Sophie were able to set things right, have some sexytime (which was AHmazing) and that Sophie was able to step out of her comfort zone and try new things. I just love this. 4 CHAPTERS IS NOT ENOUGH :P Great job, girls! <3

Aww it sucks that this was the last chapter to this :(
I'm am glad that Sophie and Brian were able to make up and have some hot make up sex. Sophie now more open with trying new things out with Brian. Amazing update :)

Aww! I'm sad that this is the last chapter! Thats no fun. but i can't wait to see what you and Sophie have up your sleeves.
<3 Michele

What do u mean the last chapter? What about matt and kari?

Love it, hot, steamy, kinky ending ;)

Loved this! Hot and romantic ending.

Holy sexiness! That was amazing. He sure doesn't like being teased, does he? :P So amazing. And she told bitchface Astrid off, which was righteous. AND MATT ASKED HER TO MARRY HIM, OH MY GOD! I love this. I can't wait for the next chapter, really want to know how things go with Brian and Sophie <3

Amazing update :D
Matt sure didn't like it when Kari teased him like that and wouldn't let him touch her. Tho he sure did give it to her ;)
Aww Matt asked her to marry her :D
I can't wait to see how it went for Brian and Sophie.

I LOVE IT I LOVE IT I LOVE IT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON

Haha. Who know that the teasing wouldn't last long with Matt! I hope astrid learns to back off. Otherwise Kari will be quick to give her another colorful eye. Also, I'm happy Kari decided quickly that she would cut back on her work.
<3 Michele

Love it, Astrid won't bother Matt anymore unless she wants her ass beat again, Matt proposed :) can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)

So good! Loved the update! Can't wait for more! <3

Ahh! I loved that. So hot, id say you got over the smut writing slump! loved the sex shop bit...haha, everyone should have a friend like Kari to help them out!
Now, the proposal!!!I so didnt see that coming! loved it though, so sweet. This chapter was awesome:), Im ready for the Brian chapter now though! He was pretty pissed off when it left off with him....more more more

Well, I liked the torture. XD Even if it didn't work out like she wanted, but that was way more effective than just holding out and not even giving a little show. The smut was super hot. Though Matt did piss me off when he said that Astrid wouldn't think he was availible if Kari didn't work so much. Like it's Kari's fault that another woman is trying to get with him. >< Kind of wished Kari had gotten mad over that, just like I wish there had been more of an argument about her working less. Even if she wanted that, I just feel like she gave in too easy. But the Astrid situation is far from over, and changing numbers won't help either. Liked the marriage proposal though. :) Great update! :D

Absolutely amazing chapter, seriously top notch smut!! I can't wait for the next chapter :)))

i love this update and yep teasing Matt definitely did the trick if that yummy smut was anything to go by :-)

Somehow I don't think Astrid is going to get the hint - she's still trying to hump his leg like a jack russell lol

Ooh, gotta love a marriage proposal!!!!!!!