Good Things Come From Bad Jobs - Comments

Comment swap:

This was a good start to the story, you did a good job describing his grump mood and his somewhat crappy life. I don't follow this person IRL but I didn't feel like I needed to go out and figure it out because you did a good job describing him.

I love it :)

Please write more?? :)

are you going to do more of this? i really hope so cause its a good idea :)

Comment swap:
I'm not going to lie, when I first saw the title, I thought this was going to be Falling in Reverse, not Avenged Sevenfold (and I'm not quite sure, it's not like they're close to being the same thing at all)—but then I read the summary and then it made so much more sense.

To be perfectly honest, I don't like the layout—though, that's because I have to use my phone since my shitty laptop broke down—and I can barely read the summary, but that's not too big of a deal.

So, the first thing I noticed about this story was that it was so well-written, which is extremely rare on this website, and that the plot line had a strong beginning. And the Brian/Zacky pairing?—not generally the type of strories I read, and if it weren't for comment swap, I probably wouldn't have.

I like the fact that—for a first chapter—this is pretty long, compared to some of the other stories I read on this site. It's detailed just enough to make someone interested, and it's not overdoing the "I'm gay!" thing like most people do in their stories.

There were a few mistakes every now and then within the chapter, but all in all, this was a masterpiece. I just hope you can continue soon.

This is great! Very original and well written. Zacky's emotions towards work and the kids seem so real/relatable. More soon? :3

Me like update soon so that We the people can learn why Bri didn't show up

This is great!!!! Can't wait to read more

This is going to be good I can tell!C: I can't wait for your next update~ xx

wow... this sounds really interesting! :)) can´t wait for another.. :) I wonder what will be Brian´s lame excuse xD oh and poor Zack.. those kids must be horribly annoying.. :D
I loved it!

Oooh this is so good. I can't wait to read more!! I love the fact that he is already mad at him and he doesn't know him! You have to update soon, pretty please :)