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  • collectivision

    collectivision (100)

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    I really like this, I like Emaleigh's character. She definitely feels relatable. Keep it up.
    July 11th, 2012 at 05:40am
  • Killingbunny

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    i like it :]
    July 7th, 2012 at 03:32am
  • littlemisslonely

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    I like it. Though there is one thing I don't like. You keep using "then" instead of "than". Well, when than is actually needed, that is. Other than that it is fantastic. :) I especially love how she and her sister reffered to them. Haha. :)
    June 29th, 2012 at 01:03am
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