The Fighter - Comments

I'm the awesomest commenter! Lol. JK.
I agree with musicalsprinkle, watch out for the paragraphs. They tend to be a tad bit too long. :) Other than that great! :D
- Jenn.

I swear I commented on this before. But obviously I didn't, so here I am. THIS IS AWESOME! Just, watch the paragraphs, alright? Keep this shit up, I'm lovin' it! ;)

Sorry I havet commented, but I would read during break at work. Lol. Anyway great great great! I love it I can't wait for the rest. :)
Like I said this story is gonna be kickass! :)
-Jenn

You are missing an "e" in plane. Lol. Then you missed the "S" in she when you were saying "He held out her hand in courtesy to shake mine;"
Other than that its great and I like it :)
I'm going to subscribe to this <3
- Jenn :)