Bo-Bo Employment - Comments

I got this story through comment swap. Initially, I wasn't sure about it being just dialogue, but, I was kind of surprised when I really liked it. You show good characterization, I really got a sense of who the characters were. I love the theme. My only complaint is that the text is kind of small. Personally, I found it to be a bit hard to read at some points. Overall, lovely story. :)

OhMyGod this is brilliant! I enjoyed it so much, the back and forth, and communication with "sweetbums".
Yes.

HAHAHAHAHA! So I got this story off of comment swap and after being stuck with reading depressing, saddening stories, I was relieved when I got this little gem. I have to say, you did a damn good job keeping your readers entertained. I was very impressed when I found out that it was a dialogue only story. I’ve only read a few like that and to tell you the truth, they did not seem to appealing to me. But you definitely did the story justice. Even though it was dialogue only, you conveyed every emotion and still made it fun and interesting. Keep up the good work and I’m definitely recommending.

This was really great, I was entertained the whole time! Double thumbs up! ^_^