Though the Truth May Vary, This Ship Will Carry Our Bodies Safe to Shore - Comments

Love it! Great job! You should write a Loki story!

Ohmygod the ending is just perfect, seriously I'm crying over it!

So cute, Congrats and THANK YOU FOR THE STORY! :D

aw! That was so cute when he woke up:)

NOOOOOO Gah. I need an update xD Lol LOVE IT!

Hmm.. This is really good. I like the writing style of it, the detailing, the characters and how they interact with one another and how they are build up. I like the feel it has, and how you switch between now and the past. It was a little hard to follow at first. But not for long. I wonder what will happen next in this. Good story so far, I'm subscribing and hoping for more soon.

please let that bright blue light be Tony's lazer shooter thingys!!!!!

Mind. Blown. I love the Thor and Steve's interactions and their adorable naivety. I'm incredibly impressed by how seamless the plot is, you created a wonderful character that just fits perfectly in the somewhat-altered storyline. Tony is the only one whose character seems different from the movie persona but I think I'm alright with that. Everything is just wonderful and I must say, you write classy sex scenes. It's hot enough to be interesting but not so smutty as to seem dirty. More soon? Update any story of yours and you make my day!

Haven't read it yet, I was just following the link from the Inception story. I love love LOVE the title, amazing song. Going to read it now, comments soon.

I totally understood the flashback thing, took me a moment though.
And I"m glad her and Tony finally got it onnnn!

Ahaha Gah. Tony is just so.. clueless sometime's xD Not even clueless, just like oh man he cracks me up. I feel bad for Naomi though... If I saw my brother that had tried to kill me, and he acted like that, I probably would have high tailed it out of there too.

GAH. I LOVE this. Absolutely, positively LOVE this.

Love this already. I look forward to more.

P.S. LOVE the song you pulled lyrics from for the title. Of Monsters and Men is too amazing for words. It was a good choice. :)

I'm loving this. One, I love the Avengers. Two, I love how you created Naomi to have a cool superpower even if she was experimented on to get that way. I was only confused by the beginning, but you'll probably explain that as the story goes on. Keep writing!