This story pulled me in immediately, and I have't found many stories on mibba that could do that! Usually short chapters drive me nuts, but yours are short and simple and to the point, and they are actually really beautiful. You writing style is magificent, wonderful vocabulary, great structure, pin-point attention to detail. Overall, just wow! And is it just me or is this somewhat reminiscent of Cinderella? Subscribing to find out more!
June 27th, 2014 at 03:24am