Bread and Water - Comments

This story pulled me in immediately, and I have't found many stories on mibba that could do that! Usually short chapters drive me nuts, but yours are short and simple and to the point, and they are actually really beautiful. You writing style is magificent, wonderful vocabulary, great structure, pin-point attention to detail. Overall, just wow! And is it just me or is this somewhat reminiscent of Cinderella? Subscribing to find out more!

So, I really like this. I love forbidden love and princes/princesses. I'm super excited for what's gonna happen next. I also like the shortness of the chapters. Keeps the readers hooked and wanting more. Update soon! :)

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Totally intriguing and in so few words...

Who is the boy with the blue eyes? Who is the girl doing the dreaming? So many questions fly into my mind. I have subscribed so I can find out the answers to these and more!

I got this from comment swap. It's not very long, so I can't really comment much on it. However, what I can say, is that it was very well written. It certainly increases the curiosity of the reader. If this was a prologue, you made a very good job out of it. Well done!

This sounds really good so far. Kind of mysterious.. I love it. Maybe it's in the older days and she's poor and he's rich so they can't be together! Maybe they're different races? I don't know I'm just grasping at straws :) But I do like it so far, it intrigues me sooo... I'm... subscribing!

This sounds as if it's going to be a great book, I cannot wait to read more! Please keep up the good work, it honestly does sound good and the layout seems fine, I like the name you've chosen too because it catches your eye and you think, I wonder what this is about...
Keep it up and well done! I will be subscribing!