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  • Sazerah

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    @ Animanian
    Thank youuuuuuuuu Mayaya <3
    April 6th, 2013 at 01:45am
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    @ Sazerah
    Haha yeah sorry about that ive been busy and i havent gotten the time to type the next few chapters in sooo long! Ill be sure to do it soon in these next few days promise! ;)
    April 5th, 2013 at 06:08pm
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    Chapter 16 pleaase Mayaya!
    ~Dz
    April 1st, 2013 at 04:19pm
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    Chapter 16 pleaase Mayaya!
    ~Dz
    April 1st, 2013 at 04:19pm
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    Mayaya! Write the next chapter! I'm a read-aholic! Please! I'll help you write it if that's what it takes just pleeeeaaassee write the next chapter soon!!!!
    ~Dz
    April 1st, 2013 at 04:17pm
  • R3m3m83r_th3_ging3r

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    Yeah, sorry, I got confused and thought that chapter fourteen was chapter thirteen! Sigh, I think it was a monday.
    January 18th, 2013 at 05:31pm
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    @ Luckwing
    Hehe yeah writing as an insane person is fun, its also challenging at some points as well! sorry I haven't uploaded chapter 14 yet, I write and then type and im not even finished chap 14 yet. (Got school to blame for that. Y_Y ) Anyway Luckwing thanks so much for all the comments its really fun to have feedback on Gloom, it makes me REALLY wanna keep writing. Motivated! :D thanks so much!
    January 15th, 2013 at 02:12am
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    January 15th, 2013 at 02:12am
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    Noooooo! What's wrong with Xera? What is she, exactly? Is she clairvoyant? I really liked, it though, and it is so much fun to write from the veiw of an insane person!
    January 15th, 2013 at 01:53am
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    Yup! I really like the plot of this book, though. However, I didn't get a chance to read the fourteenth chapter yet. I'm on it! Mr. Green
    January 15th, 2013 at 01:27am
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    @ Luckwing
    Ahhh that makes alot of sense! ;D
    January 15th, 2013 at 01:05am
  • R3m3m83r_th3_ging3r

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    You said that she was way off when she guessed he was a demon, and I am obsessed with angels right now!
    January 15th, 2013 at 12:47am
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    @ Luckwing
    Haha! Omg thank you for all the comments wow that means alot! :D and oh pretty smart, tell me, what gave it away when u first guessed he was an angel? :D And yes IX is not trustable...;D
    January 15th, 2013 at 12:21am
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    I knew it! I knew Doohm was an angel! Mr. Green
    January 14th, 2013 at 12:01am
  • R3m3m83r_th3_ging3r

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    Just finished chapter seven, I think- I KNEW THERE WAS A REASON I DIDN'T TRUST IX!
    January 13th, 2013 at 11:46pm
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    Uhhh, I don't trust Ix.
    January 13th, 2013 at 11:28pm
  • R3m3m83r_th3_ging3r

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    Just finished reading chapter four- is Doohm an angel? I bet he's an angel!
    January 13th, 2013 at 10:42pm
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    Just finished chapter three- Xera can't be dead!!
    January 13th, 2013 at 10:27pm
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    Sorry, sorry! didn't mean to post that twice!
    January 13th, 2013 at 10:01pm
  • R3m3m83r_th3_ging3r

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    I just finished reading the intro, and I really like it! I'm hoping to see more of the shadow guy in the future...
    January 13th, 2013 at 10:00pm
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