Augh. I tried to avoid reading this until it had more updates because I knew from the description it was going to be awesome and now I've read it all and it is awesome and now it's going to be really hard for me to wait for updates. You're developing them fine. So long as they don't admit their "secret" undying love for one another before like, the 15th chapter, you're doing an awesome job. I mean. I suppose you could argue that their relationship is going a bit fast, but I mean. It was a date. It's not like they kissed or anything yet. So long as her inability to flirt lasts a while, you're completely fine.
Oh Lucy is just the sweetest thing. And so is Harry, being all cute with her in the texts. I'm so glad you updated! I missed this story terribly. :) Can't wait for more love!
louis is quite the feisty little fellow, isn't he? i love him though, always making me laugh. this chapter was nice! even when she's completely pissed she tries to keep her head on straight. and look at harry making a slick move on her in the bar asking her out like it's no big deal. you go hazza, you get her! =] this story is absolutely adorable. i love it.
I like how you make her, and I think this was a good update. It was nice to see her not so confident and flirty like most main characters can be, loved it update soon!
can't wait. lucy is just adorable. and this doesn't have my last comment on it. i just saw that. anywho! i mentioned that her character is well rounded for a celebrity and i only hope she stays that way, it's cute. and so is harry, as always. =]
Awh I love this, I like how real Lucy is. I don't know she just puts out a 'this is me' kind of persona that I love. But maybe that's just me, but can't wait for the next update.
I really like this, and I definitely like how the whole meeting thing is over and done with, there was no diddle daddling which is always nice. Anyway, I really liked this and looking forward to your next update!