Can We Colour, Bren? - Comments

  • Suffocating Hearts

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    I've missed this story. I know it's been more than a year since the last chapter was posted, but I was curious to see what else you'd do with this story.

    It's still just as good as the first time I read it :)
    September 25th, 2009 at 12:27am
  • fleshyle

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    This is...brilliant. You've developed your characters so well and the general idea of this is evoking if not completely genius. I love the way you express motions, sounds and capture every aspect of your stroy. I really hope you continue this soon because I'm dying to read more hehe

    xomuch love,
    Ellie
    December 7th, 2008 at 03:36pm
  • Helvius Cinna

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    aw! why haven't you updated : (

    i wanna know!! aw.....
    August 27th, 2008 at 04:24am
  • Suffocating Hearts

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    I know this is late, but this story is...amazing. I'd said something like that before, but just the way that you write, it draws you in. You use a lot of detail and you get right into the heads of the characters, which I think makes a great writer. It doesn't matter if your chapters are huge or not, it's still a brilliant story. Post more when you can. :)
    July 22nd, 2008 at 04:57am
  • scootercrasheart

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    *cries*....this chpt was reallly good, i feel bad for poor bden, but also for ryan who can't count past 20
    July 20th, 2008 at 02:56am
  • cheeky slag.

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    this is extravagantly beautiful
    I cried all the way through just imagining this within my head.
    July 18th, 2008 at 03:07am
  • Chiharu Hikari

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    Even if I'm not too into Panic At the Disco, this story very well made and it brought out the perfect emotions for this certain type of situation (even if I hadn't went through it before), and keep up the good work.
    July 17th, 2008 at 03:15am
  • Bloody_Romance

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    awww
    i hope Ryan snaps out of it eventually.
    July 16th, 2008 at 09:43pm
  • TeaCakeLady

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    nikki harlequin.:
    wow, this is surprisingly good.
    innovative idea, very original and well thought out.

    your writing style conveys the plot very well.
    but also delves deep into the emotional sense of the story.

    VERY good :D
    i think i'll subscribe, even though i don't really read rydens.
    i agree.
    these words are so powerful they nearly brought me to tears.
    you have some amazing talent.
    XO
    July 15th, 2008 at 11:57am
  • Tom Fletcher.

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    I adore this. You have an incredible talent for original plots.

    This is the first Rydon I've read and I've fallen in love with it. Chapter three made me cry; you're exceptionally good at capturing emotion. I hope you continue soon :]
    July 15th, 2008 at 10:50am
  • jesslovespanic

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    This is absolutely amazing. I love the originality.
    July 15th, 2008 at 09:50am
  • Estrogen Pills.

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    I absolutely adore this story, still. Even through the delay, I thought about it a lot. Hell, I even told my mom about it! It's so sad but...adorable.

    This chapter made me cry, but I guess that's a good thing for you. You're an amazing, very detailed writer.

    More soon?
    July 14th, 2008 at 08:31pm
  • Olivia Colby

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    I don't know if you're writing a fic about a real band that I don't know, or if you're writing about some made up band, but either way this story is captivating.
    July 14th, 2008 at 03:55am
  • nikki harlequin.

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    wow, this is surprisingly good.
    innovative idea, very original and well thought out.

    your writing style conveys the plot very well.
    but also delves deep into the emotional sense of the story.

    VERY good :D
    i think i'll subscribe, even though i don't really read rydens.
    July 14th, 2008 at 03:46am
  • m.f.e.o

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    Aw, poor Brendon. I can't imagine what it's like for someone you love to just...regress like that.
    July 14th, 2008 at 03:43am
  • castle.

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    You've got two options Kor. Update or I kill you in your sleep. :file:

    Kidding.
    May 1st, 2008 at 06:45am
  • Daisydog

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    please update soon!
    April 27th, 2008 at 05:38am
  • all x wrong

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    wow i love this idea :]
    i'll be reading...updateee ?
    April 17th, 2008 at 08:43pm
  • jesslovespanic

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    Eek! Imagine if this was reality o_O
    Poor Bren, having to go through this.
    My bet is it has something ot do with Mr. Ross *squints*
    April 17th, 2008 at 08:21am
  • AmericanBaby

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    Aww poor Brendon!
    This story is great! More?
    April 17th, 2008 at 04:29am