The Road Less Traveled - Comments

wow, just wow. this was incredible. i have to admit i may have had a little cry at the end .

the layout fit perfectly, it was nice but still readable, and it complemented the story really well.

the story itself was beautiful. it could probably do with another proof read, but just to improve the quality even more. i didn't notice any spelling mistakes, or major grammatical errors. <3

Oh. My. Gosh. That is all I have to say. This was so beautiful and I loved every word. It really sucked me in and got me right in the heart. An incredible read, please write more. So. Freaking. Beautiful. That is all.

Kristen.

Beautifully written. I really connected with the story and it captured my heart!

Wow... All I can say...
While I don't like the concept of you dying :/
This is absolutely beautiful.
Heartbreaking. But beautiful.
You really are good at breaking me down, dude.
Like I told you yesterday, I knew it'd be amazing.
And it really was. Incredible. Amazing. All those kinds of words.
I love you, best friend.

*sitting in corner crying in an ugly fashion*

That wasn't even fair, Katie. I was so unprepared for that considering it's just seven in the morning and the hormones are destroying my body. >.< This was so sweet and so real and so touching, and every time I see her name, all I remember is when you told me and that text I sent you on that one Mother's Day and it just all makes me so sad. But it was so beautiful, and one day, yeah, it's totally going to happen. Don't ever lose faith in that. <3 Ever. Even when everything else is fucked up. God... No words, Katie. No words.

This was absolutely... beautiful...

As you could see for several minutes after me reading this, I was too busy trying to stop crying to even form coherent sentences as to how I felt about this story... I was quite literally speechless. There are no words to describe this piece, because... it's about a mother's love, and a mother's love is just...indescribeable. it's unconditional, and powerful, and no one and nothing could ever stop it. not even the boundaries of life and death, or those of reality to reality... just...

the way that everything was portrayed, the words you used to put it all together, to paint the images and moments with vivid color, and sound, and feel, and /memory/... it all was amazing. i can't really put together the words that i want to, to explain how i felt for this story.. how i felt, reading through the moment where Lucy told her mommy that she had come to bring her mommy home... there was something in that that just...broke open the dam. (hence the fact that i am now beginning to cry again.) i don't know how you did this, i don't understand how you can write things as beautifully as you did this, but... i am in absolute awe...

i loved this so, so much...

ily bestieFIRlifeeee <333

Molz