Halcyon - Comments

love the idea! excited for more

Otay so I'm too lazy to write up a good comment so um yeah this is good and you should update this (or one of your other stories, 'cause you know, those are good too) and I'm slowly getting over the fact that you chickened out on the student/teacher bit and um that's all I got.

OH! Everyone’s dying. That’s the side effect of life.
/well hai tfios when did you get here

Yeah. Now that's all I got.
GO WRITE OTAY BYES.

Dude omfg. First off Aaron Johnson as Garrett is perfection. Second off this story will end in nothing but my tears I can tell you that right now. Like ugh, I bet you they're gonna fall madly in love and then one day she'll collapse and he won't know what to do and then fuck this story, I quit.

But seriously. Update. Now.

oh my god he's such a romantic

WHERE'S THE REST this is so perfect

Wonderfully written. Subscribed.

okay I think I'm in love with Garrett/Prince okay
I LOVE THIS SO MUCH
please update soon

This is so good!

'The first time I met Adena Belrose I was as high as a kite and as miserable as a man on death row.'
That, my dear, is pure gold. The minute I read that first line, I instantly loved this story! This whole story on itself is even good enough to get published. Girl, in all honesty, when you were gone, I had no idea you'd bring back A FREAKING TREASURE TROVE WITH YOU!
Now, the second chapter AMAZING! I AM IN LOVE WITH IT/YOU!
Welp, bye.

HOLY SHIT THAT BOY SOUNDS AMAZING OKAY
Garrett
unph
and Aaron Johnson UNPHHHH
but he's married to this 40-something year old lady
I mean, it's sweet and shows that love has no limits but he's half her age.
ANYWAYS.
this story oh my goodness I love it so much already

“You’re new here.”

“How did you know?”

He smiled then, and it reminded me of running and forests and everything secretive and exciting in the world. Small dimples formed at the corners of his mouth as he looked at me, eyes dark and steady but enthralling nonetheless. “I know too much about this town.”

that oh my gosh
that made my day aksjdhclkajshdflkcjahwlefkj
PLEASE UPDATE SOON

god damn this is beautiful

I like it the description is AMAZING! seriously I read it and I was hooked! and that generally doesn't happen.... anyway I can't wait for an update :)

I think you've already shown me the new layout and character page. Why did you link me again. Why.
/Grampaa you are losing it though omg stawp

I really don't want to put any effort into this comment 'cause I'm kind of tired, so I'll just say OMG UR FABULOUS, GUUUURL and Y NO STUDENT/TEACHER.

Yeah. I'm off to take a nap. Byes.

OM NOM NOM AARON JOHNSON IS RIGHT.

/sorry I keep spamming you I'll make this one worthwhile
/a comment from Iggy that's worthwhile wat

Otay, so last night you probably realised (from all the encouragement and flailing) that I am really really really looking forward to this. I doubt that I've ever told you this, but I have a very interesting love/hate relationship with affairs and stuff like that. I don't even know why. I just love them.
(Hint hint: it'd be awesome if the teacher was married.)

At the same time, I always feel bad for the person who's being cheated on/the person who's affected negatively by all of it, because they're usually good people and the cheaters are always assholes and I still love it. KLBGAKLDGSADLJH CONFLICTING FEELS.

But this is getting way off topic. Point is, this and all the cliches (even though there's only one ) and whatnot sounds fantastic and I seriously cannot wait to read it from someone who can actually write.
/because finding someone who writes cliches and writes well is one hell of a bich

So, get planning and writing because brain farts are fun and raunchy cliches are great. (Lawl.)

/ this comment was not worthwhile nope not at all