The Glass Coffin - Comments

Comment swap!
I'm not really a fan of Snow White but I really like this! I applaud you idea of making a modern day Snow White! The only suggestion I would make is that it's a little confusing figuring out who is talking. It's like the names got jumbled or something. But great work!

here from comment swap, Like how you started it. Your writing style is good, you space your dialog out perfectly, and the character is intriguing. Not sure how else to say this, but it all seems near perfect! Every aspect of it, not just the story itself(which is fantasti). the layout is not only easy on the eyes, but it fits as well. Add some twists in this story and people will surely keep reading. Keep this story updated, its good.

Here from comment swap. I loved the introduction, it was too adorable! I really love your writing style, and your grammar and spelling are just about flawless. Wonderful descriptions, and again with the intro, you really drew me in to the story! Keep it up!