I'll Show You Everything - Comments

  • MockingJay

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    I loved it. It was a little sad but still beautiful. Harry will make a great dad someday :)
    July 8th, 2012 at 05:07pm
  • honeyjoons

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    Omg I have so many feels about this.

    First of all, I love the layout! It's light and simple and just plain lovely.
    Secondly, I also liked how this was different. It wasn't a happy family story book ending thing. Gabby left and Harry was upset and Caelyn questioned him about it eventually.
    I personally think Harry would make a wonderful dad and I couldn't help but go aw the whole time you described him taking care of Caelyn (that name is also so cute!)

    I loved this though and thanks for entering it in my contest! :)
    July 3rd, 2012 at 02:03am
  • luke ham ham.

    luke ham ham. (100)

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    This was so cute!
    But sad since Gabby left and how Caelyn reminds Harry of her. :c
    Great job! :D
    July 2nd, 2012 at 11:53pm