First of all, I love the layout! It's light and simple and just plain lovely. Secondly, I also liked how this was different. It wasn't a happy family story book ending thing. Gabby left and Harry was upset and Caelyn questioned him about it eventually. I personally think Harry would make a wonderful dad and I couldn't help but go aw the whole time you described him taking care of Caelyn (that name is also so cute!)
I loved this though and thanks for entering it in my contest! :)