Brought here by comment swap, and I can say I really enjoyed this first chapter. It was short and too the point but gave enough detail to keep a reader interested. I of course wish there was more to read, but it's definitely a good introduction to what lies ahead. I also really like the layout, it compliments the story really well and adds to the eeriness. Please keep going :)
July 3rd, 2012 at 05:50am