The Temptress - Comments

Please, please, please write a part two! I HAVE to know what happens! Will Loki mess up and show himself? Will Thor be mad? Happy? Will they get together like I want them to or just continue fucking? UGHHH, I MUST KNOW!!!!!!!!
As you can tell, I really enjoyed this. You are a great writer

Oh my.
Interesting what would happen if Loki happened to, er, lose control and go back to himself, right in the middle of you know what? Would Thor make Loki stay as "punishment"...Okay, sorry, my wild Thorki obsessed imagination is going places it shouldn't...But seriously, if you used that idea, it would be so smexy..

Write more. It's freaking brilliant. Nothing else to be said.

Oh gods, /please/ consider doing a second part to this. This is just wonderful. It is well written and the characters are believable and interesting and I just enjoyed it thoroughly. Thank you so much for sharing this! I would love to see more of it