My Little Bird - Comments

Hey lovely!

I am really enjoying the story greatly. :) It's a good read and you keep it entirely interesting. I think my favorite thing is how natural you make the dialogue. It's so believable and not forced at all.

My favorite part so far is when Asher spent the night with Harry. The moment was so cute and I love how she opened up to him and.. gahhh, it just made my heart smile.

I'm curious to know when Asher finally finds out about the boys, like if it will be that she finds out on her own, or finds out because someone finally tells her. I can't imagine it going well either way, but Asher seems too down to earth to let it phase her too much. :)

Also, I'm not too keen on Olly, but it's only due to the fact that he's coming between Harry and Asher. Or Asher and Niall, for that matter. (I know it's a Harry story, but Asher and Niall would be too cute together). I don't think Olly's the one behind the information leaking.

I have my money on Abby. She's a huge bitch and I don't like her, haha, and she's obviously out to get Asher because of the rumors about her and Harry. And Harry did mention that Abby loves reading tabloids and gossip, so I think she's the one behind it... soooo hopefully it IS her, because that would make Harry so mad that he breaks up with her for good! Meaning he can put all of his focus into winning Asher away from Olly. ;)

Anyways, great story! I hope for some more alone time between Asher and Harry soon, because it's too cute. :) <3 I just love them... and I love the way you write Harry. I'm a Niall girl, but you still manage to make me feel all sorts of Harry feels, haha.

Thanks for writing such an interesting story! I absolutely cannot wait for an update... I was sad when I realized there weren't any more chapters! :( But I definitely subbed and recommended! Keep up the amazing work!

xoxo

I agree with the boys... I don't like Olly either. There's something fishy about that boy. Asher is just too trusting.

I don't like Olly I think he the one who's tell the media about her
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Great chapter

I liked that chapter a lot! keep up the good writing :)

I don't like Abby! I hope she goes away soon ;) Very good chapter!

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Amazing chapter
I hope Harry breaks up with Abby I don't like her
I wonder how she finds out about the boys

Hey i love this story but i feel like youre dragging it out a bit, like in the real world the boys are everywhere and shes gonna atleast see one part of the media where theyre in and recognise them.

I wonder when Asher is going to realize that's the boys? That should be... Fun. Yeah, fun. Let's go with that.

Love this chapter, it's so cute!

Love it!

Great chapter
When will she find out about the boys?
I loved it
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I am completely in love with this.

I loved it :)
Amazing chapter
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Love this story! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Someone is jealous hahahahaha amazing

Harry is starting to like her haha
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Ooooh i like Jealous Harry :)

I feel that this Abigail will be a problem. Amazing as always :))

I feel that this Abigail will be a problem. Amazing as always :))

OKAY YES HARRY AND ASHER ACTION NEEEEEDS TO HAPPEN. i love it, SO MUCH. so please update sooon with some action :))))

I want to see some more Harry/Asher action :P
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Amazing chapter
I loved it
Can't wait to fi d out what happens