Kidnapped - Comments

Comment Swap :)
I really enjoy the plot of this story, and feel as though you know where you want to go with it. However, the layout was really distracting for me, and I had to use the default layout. You have great grammar, and spelling, but sometimes the sentences didn’t flow that easily for me. Keep it up though, girl. I can tell you’re going to be an amazing writer :) x

Comment swap!

Alright so there's a few things I wanna say.

One; i'm a fan of the plot you have going, but the sentences don't really flow. But on the bright side i don't think i saw any grammar or spelling errors.
Two; the layout is distracting, that can be a turn off for allot of reader. (i know some that wont read stories because of it.)
Three: I would be careful about the links in the first chapter because it goes against Mibba's guide lines, and that can cause a couple of problems for you.

all this is honesty and i'm going to subscribe.

please do not delete its a great story and i love the plt

ITS SUCH A GOOD STORY!
Don't delete (:

I understand where you're coming from with the deleting of the story, because I'm sure it's a difficult sorry to write. Gut maybe try a couple more chapters to see if it's gets any easier to write before you just complete end it. Anyway, I liked this update soon!

Heyy. Don't delete it. <3 I love this so far. I even recommended it and I don't do that a lot :O xx

I've never real read a One Direction fan-fic like this! But I love ittt. Update soon? (:

Hmm, this is a first!! but i like it so far, please update again soon!!

Update! Heh at first I Don't know why but I thought One Direction was kidnapping her. :P

Update! Heh at first I Don't know why but I thought One Direction was kidnapping her. :P

updateee(:

cool plot

This seems like it's going to be quite the story (and I mean that in a good way), it already appears to be completely different than majority of one direction fan fiction so I'm excited. Update soon?