All the Shades of Her - Comments

This story is amazing. I love Evan's voice and I completely fell head over heels for Charis too. When Charis was with Reece, it completely broke my heart. I completely empathized with Evan in this. Your writing is so clear, I love it!

This is absolutely amazing. I will definitely be checking out your new story, but obviously by now is an older story. I can't choose who I'd rather see Evan with. It's kind of an 'I-love-to-hate-charis' kind of thing, and with the way the chapter ended, I kind of hope they end up together. BUT Estelle seems good for Evan, I just feel kind of bad for her that she has no idea of what she's getting into. I absolutely despise Reece, though.

oh wow! I just read the newest chapter! the intimate scene was just...flawless. your description is so delicate and lovely, I just...wow. The ending of this chapter broke my heart. Even though I love Estelle so much, I really feel for Evan right now, and Charis, as well. I have a feeling that Charis is hiding quite a bit oh her true emotions. I just can't wait for what's next! Thank you so much for the little note at the end. i really, really appreciate it. :]]] I will definitely check out your new story, as I love this one so much! <3

oh wow! I just read the newest chapter! the intimate scene was just...flawless. your description is so delicate and lovely, I just...wow. The ending of this chapter broke my heart. Even though I love Estelle so much, I really feel for Evan right now, and Charis, as well. I have a feeling that Charis is hiding quite a bit oh her true emotions. I just can't wait for what's next! Thank you so much for the little note at the end. i really, really appreciate it. :]]] I will definitely check out your new story, as I love this one so much! <3

I cannot get over how much I love this new character! Estelle really brings an entirely new side of your writing to the story, and I really enjoy it! She just seems so warm, lifelike, and bubbly. The complete anti-Charis, you know? Great job playing up the opposite theme. :] Can't wait for more!

This chapter made me smile I really like Estelle but I also like Charis. I love how you're writing this, and making it hard for me to choose who I would rather see Evan with. Hope to read more soon.

I take it back! I don't want to see Charis and Evan's relationship expand because I really, really like this new character. Estelle was so fun to read about and I was definitely getting excited when something was about to happen. Only to be very disappointed when absolutely nothing happened, aw. But I was very happy to see this updated. Once again, the chapter was so beautifully written.

I love this story so much. It's so wonderfully written and heartbreaking.

But, for the record, I can wait for for Reece to become a more prominent and important character because gah.
I want to see Charis and Evan's relationship expand and I don't much like Reece.

I'm not exactly sure why but I've been so intimidated to comment on this story. I'm pretty positive it's because it's such an amazingly written story and I just feel as though anything I say will be void and useless because I am absolutely in love with this, and will literally just babble about it because it's that awesome.

I love the title of this story. Honestly it couldn't have been more perfectly picked and reading the story, the story lives up to its name. The layout was also very nice and easy to read so I was happy with that. I had had to read it on Internet Explorer lately rather than Safari and I was happy that it was still pleasing to the eye.

So this story just takes my breath away. I stumbled on it one night while writing my own story and getting stuck and I had only meant to read maybe one chapter but I read all the chapters posted then and there. It was amazingly written and I felt I understood what Evan was feeling and there was so much about Charis I loved and I could really understand why Evan felt the way she did but Charis being herself just didn't really notice it. This is such a beautiful story, and it just makes me want to read it again and again with the chapters you post. I really hope this goes far and we get to see Charis an Evan's relationship expand and change, though there's always Reece.

It's so harsh and amazing, and addicting. I love it !

I'm so glad I found this story! It's well written and just amazing! Can't wait to read more.

I'm dying because you are amazing. Okay, bye.

So I was looking for something to read today, and I happened upon this story during my search. I clicked on it out of curiosity, not expecting much since I'm not really a fan of femmeslash, but keeping an open mind anyway.

I couldn't have been more wrong. I absolutely adore the story that you've set up here between Evan and Charis. I love how complicated and confusing they are, and, as Evan so rightly puts it, that they're always one step forward, two steps back. Their chemistry is perfect, and I can completely understand the total frustration Evan feels over how much she has to take care of Charis, and yet Charis never really seems to appreciate her.

I also LOVE Evan's character, how she's really witty and has little side-thoughts while she's telling her story. The writing is so beautifully crafted and funny and smart, and there's a great balance of description and well-put-together dialogue here. This story is seriously fabulous, and I can't wait to read more installments!

So, this is amazing and I love it and it's been awhile since you updated. Mind maybe getting back to it?? :D

Wow I love this story, it is written beautifully, and it's really interesting. I want to read more, update soon please. x

I love the way you phrase things. How we get to know the narrator through small little witty anecdotes. Fucking awesome.

"Charis never told me anything herself unless she was pissed. Incidentally, I told her everything (almost)."

flawless.

"Mostly kids went there to fuck or get drunk or high or fall in love. I’d only been once, and for none of those reasons. Charis had been plenty of times, for all of them probably."

fucking amazing line right there. I am really intrigued by Evan. The dynamic she has with Charis is....kind of different, electric.

"It was wonderful – drunk or whatever – it was amazing. She was amazing. She tasted like whiskey and cigarettes and first kisses and everything that I wanted. Right then it didn’t seem important that I was probably falling in love with her on the pebbles in the darkness by the lake."

ugh ugh ugh so good!

yeah so, just read chapter one and I am really, really liking this so far. That's something too, because I am so damn picky when it comes to this subject matter. Reading two now!

Fuck yeah; this is awesome! Keep it up :)