Honestly, this is incredible. The way you're writing this makes the work seem so vivid and alive. I am literally having to stop and picture scenarios on my head because of the impeccable detail you've weaves into this. You're writing style is Incredibly crafty, and I am having such a great timreading this. You'd better not stop writing, sister.
Okay. I love Richard. I FREAKING HATE MARK PELLEGRINO, DO YOU WANT TO DIE TODAY, BROSEF? NO? THEN SHUT THE HELL UP. And how dare he start a personal attack on Gerard, you dick, shut up. Leave his brother out of this, can I please run Pellegrino over with a tractor or whatever futuristic riding thing they have, I'm gonna kill 'em. Anyhow, onto the happy. Yay for Gerard thinking Frank's attractive and yay for Frank and Gerard about to work together, this is about to be lovely, okay, I can sense it. And then it's so smart and science-y as well and I feel like I'm learning something, okay, like, yes. I lovelovelove this, so much, like, you don't understand.
And the last line, yes, it's about to begin some more. Awww, love. <3
OMGWUT. This story is crazy different, and I like it. So much scientificness, I feel as though I'm learning more here than I do in class. XD I really like the way it's starting out, and it has length to the chapters, thank you, Lord, but of course, I knew you wouldn't disappoint. It's so unique and I just love it, how there's history to it and everything, (and The War ohmygosh, way to terrify me, now I'm flailing about and wanna hear more about it) and it's just crazy. And Gerard with glasses, I feel as though that should be it's own separate thing. Just...unff, yes. XD Mattie is just the best thing to ever exist ever and I really love him, and I love this, and I need more. MORE. I'm so glad you're back. <3
November 4th, 2012 at 01:48pm
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