I really like this story! I really hope you post a chapter soon! I loved when Mikey and Ray started making out and Franks all "My eyes!!!" LMAO made me laugh.
This is really good so far! I like the whole timer idea :) By the way, I don't know if I read it wrong or not but when you described Doms in the summary, it kind of sounded like they torture and kill their children. Maybe I'm just being silly XD
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
FIVE COMMENTS Btw I'm starting to get like addicted to this and theres only two chapters so far! I really love this plot because it's original almost. O_O
I can't wait for you next update! Which should be soon yeah? :D