Azure Crescent - Comments

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This is a great first chapter, I'm totally intrigued!
I love your descriptive flow, it draws me in! I think that you could start the preview by saying, "The Hunters.." That's just a personal preference to me. Or, if you are going to keep it the way it is, possibly include quotation marks? idk, it just seems a little odd. Either way, I'm excited to read it. The layout is clean and the colors are nice.
whoops, didn't mean to send that already. Just to let you know, your picture isn't showing up for the layout. But other than that I think it's going to be a great first chapter. Keep up the good work!

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This is a great first chapter, I'm totally intrigued!
I love your descriptive flow, it draws me in!

Here for comment swap!
This is a great first chapter, I'm totally intrigued!
I love your descriptive flow, it draws me in!

O_O NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D

When is the next chapter coming out??

OOH I like this a lot :) You have talent! I loved your descriptions. You really know how to paint a picture, and how to do it WELL. This was amazing! I can't wait to see what else you come up with. I loved this :)

Wow.... I was left speechless by just reading the summary. And I shall Quote "Azure Crescent
Hunters are gathering forces, they are becoming stronger. Now is the time to join together, to put away our differences and protect our young. This has been the third pack murder in the last six months.
The last pack murder.
This will end.
Whether I live through it or not"
That is totally awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
When I was reading it I felt like I was watching a movie (I have a crazy imagination) but still it was beyond the boundaries of my mind. You have great talent so please keep writing.

Oh wow, I really wasn't expecting that. It was great! Like the person said before, you went straight into the story, so there was no unnecessary things. And it was pretty short but it was detailed. Wonderfully detailed actually. Your descriptions are great, I could really imagine everything. We already have a sense of what the stories like. Basically, this chapter was amazing. GREAT first chapter honestly. I can imagine this as some badass movie! The layout is also very nice and simple, fits the story. Great job! I have nothing bad to say. haha

You went straight into the story which I love. It captivated the reader so well along with that you had a lovely layout which always helps to keep interest. Really quite... epic. I'm excited to read more so please keep going and keep updating. Sadie J. Blue xxx

I really like this story. I love supernatural stuff, and bad ass men wearing leather capes killing shit just tells you that there is going to be fun and violence ahead. I like your style of writing and I think it's perfect for this kind of genre. The only thing I have to comment on is that you should space your text out a little more, but other than that it's good.