I Told You Not to Believe in Me - Comments

Why does something always have to come between them?! I just want them to be happy. Though, I do sorta love the drama, but I think I rather for them to just be happy again.

I feel like Shane causes so much bullshit drama all the time -.-
I don't get it. Make him stop doing stupid shit like lying about smoking. Ben said it was cool in the beginning anyway :( sigh

please, please, you wonderful author, please let them have a few chapters with no disasters D: ittears my heart apart </3

Things are kinda back to normal but Shane still hasn't said it back :I Looking forward to their date though xD

"made lovely hand love to him"
I was like o.O
Made me laugh though :L My mind NEVER gets out of the gutter.
Loved this chapter, seems like they're patching things up now <3

Ace Lightning.:

OH SWEET BABY JESUS I CAN GO TO SLEEP HAPPY TONIGHT YESSSSSS!!!!!! SHANE + BEN = TOGETHER 4EVA!!!!!!!!!

Amen!! I'm in the same boat with you!!

Awww, I loved that chapter! Shane taking Ben out on a date is sooo cute!

Awww, I loved that chapter! Shane taking Ben out on a date is sooo cute!

OH SWEET BABY JESUS I CAN GO TO SLEEP HAPPY TONIGHT YESSSSSS!!!!!! SHANE + BEN = TOGETHER 4EVA!!!!!!!!!

I'm gonna start off by saying that I really love your story and I frequently read updates on my phone when I'm out because I can't wait to get home and read it.

But you seem to be lacking some commas in some very important places and I'm starting to notice it lately. When you're addressing someone, like "Call him, Ben," or "I can only do so much, baby," there needs to be a comma before the name or title of the person being addressed, otherwise someone's asking to be called Ben, and someone can only do so many babies.

That's just something that's been bugging me so I had to mention it, but I really do love your work and hope you take this as helpful and constructive criticism.

Ugh. ugh ugh ugh ugh ugh. Ugh.
That is all.
LOL

happy FOR NOW, eh?
This is going to get interesting ;)
I don't know whether it was the perfect way to get back together, and they still have a lot of issues to work out. But for the minute I'm so happy they're back together!! SHANE BETTER GET HIS SHIT TOGETHER OR ELSE ;D

ndfkmzlfzmdv <3

ndfkmzlfzmdv <3

I am totally blown away by this. From 11AM to 3:30PM I've read this nonstop when I should have been babysitting a 2 year old <3 Deffinatly my favorite thing.. Ever!

Awww they're happy again, but of course you'd say "for now". Haha not looking forward to another argument or whatever but I'm glad that they're back together and happy right now.

*bawls hysterically*
Please make it better between them soon :'(
Oh and I really like Christian and Tony, they sound adorable :3 Looking forward to the MONSTA chapter <3

There should be more Tony and Christian they sound awesome <3

I love Tony and Christian, new otp right there xD Oh god, I hope it's a good monster, or maybe Ben mentions James and compares James to Shane cause that's a big N-O in any relationship oops.
And I, personally, love writing sad stories, but hopefully something good happens at Shane and Ben's....downfall? Those boys deserve to be happy.

ahh i agree, Shane fucked up this time. Poor Ben :C