The Librarian 1 - Comments

I'm afraid I'm going to agree with the others. I love the idea, you've got me intrigued by the idea itself, but the writing style does put me off slightly. Again, I don't mean to offend at all, because I do like the initial plot you seem to have going, and, obviously, everyone enjoys different things. Keep going with this, it is a really good idea! :)

I have to agree with Skittles. I don't mean it to offend you either. I guess I'm just picky with how I like things I read to be written. But I think you should keep going, maybe flesh it out a bit, add more detail.

Don't get anything negative stop you from what you want to do. If I seem rude, I'm really not trying to be.

I like the idea that you are trying to pursue but I don't enjoy the way it's written. I don't mean to offend you, actually, that is quite the opposite of what I'm trying to do, I only want to help. People who read may enjoy this, I am just one that does not. Not everyone has similar tastes. Just don't stop writing because whether I like the way it's written or not you still maintain great ideas!