Wow.. I love how this story was written. It would be amazing if you picked it back up. I have a feeling this story would turn out really great if you did.
May 30th, 2013 at 10:20pm
From Comment Swap~
I really like the premise of this story; you’ve introduced the main character Eisley (I wonder how you pronounce that, haha), her mother, and Donna very nicely. You can really tell that they’re all really close and it’s so nice to see a story where a single mother and her daughter (and her sister/aunt) get along. And I really like the descriptions and everything, especially about Eisley’s feelings about her new home. I also like that we’re able to find out more about the characters without knowing too much about them. I’m interested to find out more about their current situation and how Eisley’s days at school will go. I do sense a bit of mystery in this story and I’m curious to find out more.
Great job so far, love! <3
