I really like the layout, it's not too bold and it fits the story. I like the story as well; it was short, sweet, and to the point. I was confused why it was such a big deal they were moving again, but seven times? Geez lol. Very nice though (you had no grammar errors that I could find, which is always a plus :P)
I really like the layout, it's not too bold and it fits the story. I like the story as well; it was short, sweet, and to the point. I was confused why it was such a big deal they were moving again, but seven times? Geez lol. Very nice though (you had no grammar errors that I could find, which is always a plus :P)