sorry that im literally commenting on every story youve posted but you are such a fantastic writer omg this is the cutest thing i have ever read i literally squealed
This was absolutely adorable. A few times your verb tense got mixed, so you might want to go over it again, but other than that, it was fantastically written; great description, realistic dialogue, definite character traits. The whole time I read it, I was smiling (well, except for when Alex was crying). All in all, a wonderful story.