Unraveled Words - Comments

Really enjoyed this, I loved its quirkiness

Loved it <3

OH MY JONATHAN FREAKING WALKER.

It's done.

Ah.

The rainless storm, such a simple, beautiful way of describing the battle, and the girl in the cage...eeep...and the incline that Ryan slipped on (I feel, I feel) and angelic Brendon, the sudden pain that follows the two falling, Spencer's worry driving me mad because I have no idea when the hell he enetered the mystery of Northern Downpour (then I thought some more and reread the pararaphs above XD) and then Ryan seeing Patrick...ahem, Dr. Stump, which was just leaving me like, "Whaaa, Dr. Patrick is awesome imagining!" and then I found out why Ryan's in the hospital (Northwest=Northern, perhaps?) and I come to the conclusion that Pete's a nutter for that, and the end...the final sentence, the whole thing...oh. I loved. I LOVED.

More with Northern Downpour. MOAR. I crave. And I want a key. I want one really bad, so's I can reread with a key forever.

This was fabulous. Seriously. :)

The dock just scared the everloving crap outta me, I don't even know, it stole Ryan's shoes, that's psychotic, and then Patrick saying that Brendon is not that great and is lying to Ryan, I would really like Brendon to get his butt here and either defend himself or explain why he and Patrick don't seem like the greatest of friends, and Nine in the Afternoon is...terrifying, which is amazing because I expected something so very happy and then I was met with darkness and then there's the very, very creepy Devil in the Belfry-also dubbed Pete-and he just nyahahaha, he's so creepy, I can't find any other words, and then he says, "Don't worry about little Brenny Bear. He won't bother you anymore," and I'm sitting here thinking, 'OMJW, what'd you do to the lilac boy, you monster?!' and then Pete just starts choking Ryan without even touching him and it terrifies me and then Patrick's lightning powers (I can find nothing else to describe it except for awesomeness XD) and then Ryan collapses and his eyes closed and now I need to know what's going to happen next because this is driving me crazy and I love it SO much.

It's finished?! Oh my Jonathan Walker, the journey is ending. D: But you seem so excited about it, and I know the final 1000+ word chapter is about to be extra delicious, so I suppose I will survive. :3 Happiness for everyone! :D I can't wait for it. Seriously. I desire.

Whooooooa, shit's totally gotten real, and with Ryan's mundane sort of dream, Brendon telling Ryan that he really doesn't want to know after Ryan says that he does, and then That Green Gentleman-also dubbed Patrick-hee, he's appeared, and he's actually kinda scary in some odd way, and it's kind of awesome, but creepy...I can barely contain myself, I love this so much, all its mystery and fantasy and COLORS.

Off to listen to the whole of Pretty. Odd. Whoo! :D

Still with the no questions, Brendon's a persistent person, and then he seems so different, once so happy and then so...sad, which made me sad, because Brendon is sad, and then Ryan goes, "I would like to know the reason you look so troubled," which was fabulous, because he totally got around the "no questions" thing and that is lovely, and when Brendon says, "Not everything is what it seems," kind of scares me, but doesn't scare me, because the world is strange, but lovely and mystical and magical, and then the fact that Ryan was glowing and feeling all of these things just by being in contact with Brendon-OMG THE WALTZ I CAN'T EVEN DESCRIBE HOW MUCH I LOVE THAT WHOLE AREA OF STORY-and as soon as Ryan says, "This isn't possible," things start crashing, which scares me and has me wondering if Ryan's belief is some key component to a lot of this, and then Brendon's brown eyes and somehow actually forcing Ryan to sleep...Creepy...but awesome.

Hugs AND Grouplove? Oh my YUS.

Oh. My. God. This is some crazy lovelieness you have going on right here, I mean, seriously, with the laughs having colors and Brendon's magically changing eyes and Ryan not knowing what on earth is happening, but going along with every weird thing he's told to do because, well, what choice does he have, and then Brendon making sure that Ryan doesn't ask questions-"No." XD Awesome!-and then the hugs, those actually terrified me slightly, but in a cool kind of way, and this entire world is just mad in a really, really awesome, wonderfully strange, colorful way, and the way Brendon's speaking,a s if this is all normal (which it is to him, I suppose) is equally wonderful.

This is making me excited for more, because it's so nyhdshagdb weird in a beautiful way. YAY FOR COLORS.

Yay for hugs, too! *sends normal-variety hugs also* Dedication is what I vow. *salute*

Hehehe, subscribing, because, remember, I am your official story stalker. :3 Pretty purple colors.