Your Brown Eyes - Comments

Comment swap. I'm just going to say right now that your explaining my life in your story haha. You way with words especially with capturing feelings that sometimes words can't explain, is amazing. I can admit also that I'm sooooooo not a one direction fan but I'm always happy to see the influence of any musician on young adults like us. So again, your writing skill is absolutely fabulous. Capturing things like feeling is so hard to do. The small things always mean the most and it makes me so happy that your chapters are specifically zoomed in on the deepest of all feelings. It almost brought me to tears putting myself in khaos' shoes. Keep up the good work. Ill be back to read your third chapter for sure :) much love!

Comment swap, I hate saying this but I'm not a 1D fan, however I was quite happy to read this. I love you for using proper paragraphs, it annoys me when people bunch their writing together- make it incredibly hard to read. The layout is perfect too. I really like this, it's not like other fan fictions I've read, you have a good grasp on spelling and grammar, although I noticed few mistakes but that doesn't matter. Good luck with this =)

comment swap sent me! :)

I'm a 1D fan and I think Zayn is a sexy beast. With that being said, I was happy I got assigned this story ;) and I am not disappointed at all! There were a few minor spelling errors and sentence structure issues, but they weren't large enough to detract from the story as a whole. It was also kind of distracting how you would be talking about what Zayn was thinking in one paragraph, then jump to Khaos in the next paragraph, and keep alternating rapidly like that. It got better as the story progressed though :) so no big deal!

I kind of like the two-shot of the plot, but if you have enough story material to continue it on, by all means, go for it! :) keep up the good work!

Wow may I begin by saying I love the concept of this story so brilliant and sweet, I have fallen on love with Zayn all over again and I certainly love this story, it is well written with a superb story and great characters I love this story, one nit pick I have is that it could do with just a little more description or surroundings and clothed ECT.. But that's just me I think it great how it is

Wow may I begin by saying I love the concept of this story so brilliant and sweet, I have fallen on love with Zayn all over again and I certainly love this story, it is well written with a superb story and great characters I love this story, one nit pick I have is that it could do with just a little more description or surroundings and clothed ECT.. But that's just me I think it great how it is

Must....Have..Part...Two o.e but i like this, you already know that XD