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  • BlackQueen

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    finished it and it was good. i liked it.
    February 21st, 2009 at 01:51am
  • Lasairiona Berry

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    You would.
    February 10th, 2009 at 08:27am
  • NikkiEcstasy;

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    YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY!
    this was thee dopest story ever hun!
    sadly it has come to an end!
    BUT! IT WAS AMAZING!
    *CLAPS*
    hahaha =)
    February 10th, 2009 at 02:47am
  • cruciatus.

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    Great story. The ending was a little sad. I can't believe he shot her. But it was a good story.:)
    February 10th, 2009 at 12:42am
  • finallymoving.

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    I can't believe this is over...
    it was an amazing ending!
    February 9th, 2009 at 05:29am
  • ThePiesEndure

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    Amazing!

    just amazing...
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:21am
  • xXxMaggotxXx

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    ah, I love this story so much. It's amazing. =).
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:21am
  • RockOut

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    he shot her?!?! she really shot her? asshole
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:08am
  • finallymoving.

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    Is he really going to die?
    Hmmmm..
    hahah more soon =]
    January 17th, 2009 at 06:40am
  • RockOut

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    damn she really hates brian, if she is going to let him die...but im not to sure he will go down that easily
    January 14th, 2009 at 01:08am
  • Lasairiona Berry

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    I'd like Brian fried and on a stick please. Can't resist the white meat XD
    January 13th, 2009 at 01:53am
  • finallymoving.

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    Loved the update =]
    Can't wait to see what she does to them
    January 12th, 2009 at 12:33am
  • Zakuhree Jaymz

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    omg I just started your story yesterday, subscribed, and finished.
    and holy shit I LOVE IT.
    its amaizing.
    totally original.
    and i seriously think you should update realllllly soon.
    im sorta hooked and i need to know what happens next.
    PLEASEEEEE?
    XD
    January 11th, 2009 at 01:55am
  • RockOut

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    oo and i still cant believe brian actually shot her!
    January 10th, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • RockOut

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    i sure as hell hope she can kill her, that lucy chick sounds like one extremely pissed off, stops at nothing type of gal. She better be prepared.
    January 10th, 2009 at 06:47pm
  • Lasairiona Berry

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    Wootie Woot!!!
    January 10th, 2009 at 04:09am
  • Moira Regina

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    I'm not done yet. Trust me, I got more up my sleeve. As for a sequel, I don't know. You guys would really really have to want more. But I'm not done. Not even close. I got some readers that would kill me if I left it at this. Happy Holidays guys and gals!
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:43pm
  • The Bandit

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    wow! i really like it. congrats. did you make a sequel? b/c i like the first one, u should make a sequel... since reallly she didnt die, she just got shot in the arm i think?
    December 22nd, 2008 at 06:13pm
  • The Bandit

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    i like this story alot!! its really good. new subscriber
    December 20th, 2008 at 06:48pm
  • NikkiEcstasy;

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    YAAAAAAAAAY!
    i miss this story.
    HE FUCKING SHOT HER THOUGH!

    she should black out on him =]
    LOL
    nice job hun <3
    December 18th, 2008 at 10:14pm
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