Electricity - Comments

You should make this into a full length

Achei que iria ser mais que isso, mas foi bom :D

Awesome!

Damn! That was awesome!
And I just loved Elly! She was an amazing character :)
I wouldn't mind a single bit if this turned into a full length!

Hot damn.
This was awesome! :DDD
I thought it was going to be different when the story started, but I quite liked how it turned out. :3 I liked it... though I feel like Brian needed more of a quick fuck, and wasn't really there feeling the same way she did. <.<

Hot damn.
This was awesome! :DDD
I thought it was going to be different when the story started, but I quite liked how it turned out. :3 I liked it... though I feel like Brian needed more of a quick fuck, and wasn't really there feeling the same way she did. <.<

Whew! that was freakin' sexy as all hell! Great writing..even better sex scene...i just can;t get enough of Syn...I need a cigarette after reading this...lol. Great Job honouring his b-day!

I think my cooter just got burst and broke from reading this lmao jk

But first of all I loved that you put Framing Hanley's version of lollipop in here, to me I just love it more than the orginal

And second of all DDDDAYYYUUUMMM.

soooo awesome! totally loved this. wow. i need to have a cold shower and maybe get new ovaries.
damn brian was really really sexy in this. oh my god. okay i totally loved this! it was so hot :D

I love this, it was amazingly hot, funny and cute, amazing job hon! =)

Loved this so much I don't even know why!!! Maybe because one it had HP in it and how Elly was kinda a bookworm. two cuz Brian was being a derp lol three because I thought it was funny too. :)