Blossoming Fates - Comments

@ AvengedAngel
It's okay! It was just a little confusing and probably only because I'm like 7 months preggo right now haha so I paid more attention to that detail.

Yay! =] I will definitely be on the lookout for a sequel.

@ Syn Gates
Sorry about the time jumps. When I was writing this story halfway through my newer unposted chapters were all gone due to a virus. I am glad you enjoyed the story and I was planning on making a sequel hopefully called blooming destinies.

I totally just spent like two hours reading this whole thing... Now it's really time for me to go to bed.

I don't know if you're going to ever update and finish this, (I really hope you do) but if not, it was still pretty good to end where you left it here. The only thing out of this whole story that I noticed was a little messed up, was the pregnancy.

In the beginning, she was due in late January/early Feb. Which would have her at 7 months in November, 8 months in December and popping in Jan/Feb depending on how the dates landed... But you said around thanksgiving she was 8 months with two weeks to go and then a bit later in the story you said that she was 8 months again after making it seem like she should have been nine months.

Idk. Maybe I just had a bit of a hard time following along with your time jumps. Great story though!!

glad paytons getting better even if shes forgettngs things
and that em moved in with zack :P
love this

Dying for an update over here! Lol

ohh snapp she told him!
but now what about ashley?
i also hope payton remembers brian :)

Awe she forgot Brian :/
And uh oh hopefully Zack says something that's not stupid and ignores Ashley !
Love this

Yay! XD

Aww yay I'm glad Brian is getting better and that Payton woke up !
Love this!!

Awe I'm glad he came around ! I love this

update soon please and thank you

Love this !!!
Brian needs to stop being an ass and realize he isn't the only one suffering !!!! And he needs to be with his daughter too loved this :)

Brian is being a major ass. i know if loves payton but they can only wait fo her to wake up wake up in her own time, she's an adult and strong willed while his DAUGHTER isn't even fully developed and a baby so can't be strong and doesn't have experience to be strong willed. he needs to pull himself together and know where his real priorities are.

OMG. Brian & Payton will be okay right? RIGHT?
Update soon PLEASE

Yay!

Love it!

Ugh! Thie is KILLING me! Haha. They need to just get together already...ashley, first priority my ass! Lol

this is so good!!!! please update soon! please read "My heart will go on" im not far into writing it so it should take long to read

love it! please update soon!

HAPPY BIRTHDAAAAAAAAY !
Im loving it, please update soon <3