Just Say Yes - Comments

Love the hug!

I really like this story. Although I always find it difficult when the story is a flashback from the prologue - knowing that they are going to be heartbroken later on.

But it is the journey that makes the story worth reading - and you have some really provocative elements outlined and ready to be expanded upon.

The sparks are already flying between Jon and Ava - now if they can just ditch Kaner!

I think Jon shoul have to rescue her from her college roommate at least once before she completely leaves which will probably happen

More more :)

More please lol!!!!

Great story so far. Cant wait to read what you have planned.

Hooked! keep it up!

I am so wanting to read more to see where this all goes!!

Interesting please continue:)

Interested to see where itgoes

O this seems GOOD!!!! lol I can't wait for more :) update...NOW haha

please update, this sounds REALLY good, i'm curious to find out how they got to this point.

This is a brilliant prologue! You've opened the story really well.

This is a brilliant prologue! You've opened the story really well.