Necropolis - Comments

This is I think the 3rd time comment swap has lead me to your stories, haha, but I really did enjoy this one. As you read this piece, each sentence kind of dances and really just flows nicely into each other. It really helps set this eerie but almost ethereal vibe. My only critique would be there's a few spelling errors here and there but that's it.

Wow... Not quite sure if there is anything else that I can say. I'm hooked and I'm glad that I am. I can't wait to find out what else happens in this amazing story that you have shared with us. Keep up the outstanding work and I will be waiting for the next wonderful update. :)

Hello, me again. Once again you've managed to make me interested and curious but I'm going to keep nagging you to work on your layout! Please, because often a good layout draws attention to your story and you deserve more attention.
Anyway, this is written in a lovely way and it created a good picture in my head, I enjoyed it, well done. Sadie J. Blue xxx

Hey I'm here because of Comment Swap I'm glad it sent me to your story! I really do hope you keep this up; I think it's a really good story so far! I’m definitely going to recommend this story, well done and keep up the good work!

Thanks for your comment on Dantega earlier! I just read 'Necropolis', I was able to picture what you were trying to explain, but I think other people might struggle with it. The dialogue seemed to pause a lot, so it was easy to lose track on where the story was going. Since I saw that you were from Sweden I can understand and overlook the spelling and grammatical errors. That being said, once things in your story get going and more chapters keep getting posted, I think it's something that people will certainly like! Keep up the good work and keep posting chapters!