Welcome to the Family - Comments

It was great, I really want to read more although it's just a one shot! I think the way you write is amazing and the layout is just as good, you did well on your banner!
I'm definitely going to recommend this and subscribe, just in case you change your mind about it being a one shot. ;)

Comment Swap
Layout: 8/10
Banner: 5/10
Story overall: 9/10

I would love the banner if it weren't for the two characters on the sides of it. I think it just makes the main picture of the hands a little to clustered and the writing in the center doesn't help either. Did you do that on Paint? I've tried making banners on Paint so that's why I ask. The layout is very cute. I like the blue that contrasts with the black and white background pattern. Very interesting indeed. I agree with many of the commenters below, this is a fabulous start and I enjoyed it. Though I'm not sure of the fandom, it's great.

This story is amazing, thought Im not a huge fan of this band I still loved it. I hope your planning to write more, I really do. I think this story could be longer if you wanted to make it. Anyways amazing job on this, I hope to see more stories from you.

I loved the first chapter and can't wait for more.
I totally adore how Leana wasn't mean to her

The banner is wonderful. Maybe change the layout to match the colors of the banner or even the background so it looks smoother, not that it doesn't look good now. The one shot was awesome. I think this should be a story because it is really good and I can see it going further.

This was super cute, I loved every second of it! You did great for your first one hon =D

PS: I love your banner :D

You have absolutely no idea how happy I was when comment swap finally decided to give me an A7X story!
First of all, this was amazing. For your first one shot it was flawless, really!
I can't help but agree with one of the comments below, you should turn this into a story :P It would be a really interesting one. The characters are awesome and I fell in love with them right when they first appeared x)
Amazing job :D

This was cute. Good job :)

Well this was awesome!
I liked the plot and everything was really good
the smut was.... god! awesome
Great job! :)

OH my God... this is so genius. I'm deff following this. :D Please update soon.

So... Hmm! :) Got this from Comment Swapper... It was good for your first one shot! Very good :) If you wanted to you could even transform this from a one - shot to an actual story. But then it wouldnt be a one shot... It was good and i liked it. Usual i try to tell writers thing they can improve but i cant think of anything it was really good. cant wait toi read some of your other one - shots when you write them :D

This was a sexy one shot ;)

Aw I loved this :D
Very very good.