HOLYFUCKINGSHIT!How is this not a world-renound story, trailed after by the ghost of Shakespeare and the very much alive Stephanie Meyer. You're bloody brilliant! This is incredibly well written and phenominally original, the detail is awe-inspiring and with every second that ticks by I'm pulled in more deeply. There's also an incredible depth to this story, maturity indefinatly. Gerard is wonderfully captured in a cannibalisticly distraught way and your main character, God! I love her! and I love you! -Suscribes and Worships-
For a brief time I completely lost muse-- but it's back and for all kinds of different stories as well! =]]]]
I know this last chapter was ridiculously short but I just wanted to get a bit of the werewolf characteristics into the story. Chesirae was starting to act like too much of a mortal to me. XP
Next chapter will be up soon and much longer, I promise.
&& check out my other one-shot and if you were one of my readers from INO I have Amor Ilegal up here and ready to start up again =D
Eesh! I'm back XD Hope you guys liked the chapter;; next chapter is seriously gunna be fun to write, I can tell you that much I would start now, but IHop is calling my name ^_^
&& omgosh. I loved the last comment! Coming from an author who I just very recently started reading their briliant story [Just Hold Your Breath On The Way Down...] means a lot! Thanks again! =]]]<333333333333
I'm a huge fan of vampire fiction and I've just spent some time reading yours. I like what I read. Stories usually can't keep me interested long enough to finish them, but yours was so enthralling I had no difficulties there. There was a fair bit of humor, dry sarcasm and great narration so that I pretty much enjoyed reading this.
Hey! For all you that are still watching out for this story;; thank you so much!
I love the support and feedback from you guys =]]]
School has been crazy with all my exams coming up;; I've already written some of the next chapter but just haven't gotten around to finish it yet. It should be up during this weekend, I promise!<333333333
aw, amazing. ahaha, i'm not good at giving constructive criticism, but this story is really, really fucking good. ohh, and i'm gonna rate--10. i love how you portray the characters, and the story and characters come to life. amazinggg (: