Bumps Along the Way - Comments

  • Billie J. Armstrong

    Billie J. Armstrong (100)

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    Comment Swap brought me here, just like the rest of the people below me. :)

    I know a little about Taylor, but nothing about Noah/Joe... Is that disappointing? Anyhoo, I just wanted to let you know that I really liked your writing style. It is really easy to read and it is clear. I can read it and know exactly (maybe not exactly) what you mean. :) I really liked this story. :)
    July 13th, 2012 at 09:40am
  • elisegeree

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    Comment swap brought me here.
    I don't really follow Taylor Swift and I don't know who the Noah guy is...but either way, I like how I don't really have to know anything about them to follow the story (thus far). It was also great how you started the story off with a bang (pun intended). Good luck with your story :)
    July 11th, 2012 at 02:08am
  • Queen of Suburbia

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    I like this story. :) It's cute how their relationship is and how their first time was actually really comical. I also love the Noah/Taylor pairing. I think they would make a cute couple in real life. Now the only trick is to get them to realize it...lol
    July 10th, 2012 at 06:22am
  • marshallomnipotence

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    Hello, comment swap brought me here. First commenter =) yays. I’m not really I fan of Taylor Swift so I wouldn’t usually go out of my way to read a fan fiction based on her. But having that said I actually do like this, I think it’s well written and I like your use of words. You’re doing a good job and you’re a great writer. =)
    July 9th, 2012 at 10:51am